Jealousy - Comments

@ unapalomayunaflor
Thank you so much! :)

I adored this so much! It was beautifully written in Loki's character and had everything that he would think/do. I loved it!

@ oberyn.angel
I'm glad you liked it

Oh my gosh, the subtle humour in this is written in so well, and I have to admit that I love it when a writer does that I am thoroughly impressed with how you turned it around from being filled with both of their anger and frustration with each other to a calm loving feeling. And how she tricked the trickster, that was just brilliant. I also really like how Loki was in character, which is a huge thing for me - I feel like a lot of the Loki fics I try to read can't convey him properly, but it seemed natural the way he acted and what he thought throughout the story. I love this one-shot so much, thank you for writing it!