Kiss - Comments

That was absolutely beautiful! Your writing style is really brilliant, it reads very well. I love your plot idea too, you made it so gritty and real seeming, Franks desperation really comes through in the language you used. I'll have to check out some more of your stuff, this was divine!

The detail in here...
Its so very nice!

I can imagine it, beginning to end!
Update soon!

woah? heck this sounds fucking good more plz!!!!!!!!!!!

You kept my attention and that's really hard to do. Second story I read from you and this was beautifully done as well. Whenever I'm in a reading mood I always come to your stories :XD

Everything was well written and your descriptions were

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i love it.
more soon?

I love your morbid little love stories, they are so amazing update soon please.

This is good!

How do they live together... yet they don't?

Wait.. is it an apartment building??

Update SPoon!

Frank, you're homeless, nobody likes you.
Go home, Frank, go the fuck home!!!
I really want you to update this.

Oh, my...I'm like...drooling.
Fucking amazing. I'll be patiently waiting for more.

Interesting concept....

love it so far.
hahahhaa
youre stories are always creative and well written
so im looking forward to this.
hahahaha frank would make a realy good stalker.
i mean the height issue is just no problem...

anyway, amazing, obviously.

Dude... Does Frankie seriously live in his house?
Go home, Frank!!!
Go home or get in Gerard's pants.
Aha, this story is pretty fucking radd.

wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow this is so far the best obbsession story i have read its so perfect!!! i love it seriously! wow please update soon!!

I'm in love and I am definantly subscribeing

Frank is a bad boy. XD You know I'm not a fan of Frerard (more of an anti-fan), but I think I might keep reading this, at least for a while. I love your stories so much. :mrgreen:

Wow. From just that short section, I can already tell that this is going to be an absolutely amazing story.

I wasn't sure at first where Frank was actually watching from, but when you explained it, it made perfect sense. Just the thought of him watching Gerard sends shivers down my spine; it kind of makes me want to watch the vents in my bathroom.

The way you described everything was just... wow. I can't even begin to pick a favorite part; it was just mindblowing. This is so creepy, in the most wonderful way. I have no idea what to expect next either.

I'm definitely subscribing to this.

Wow.
That was really good. :yah

I really liked the fact that it took a while for you to explain where they were...like, I didn't understand at first where Frank was, and how he was seeing Gerard, but then it all fell into place and created this feeling of understanding in me, and I love that from a story.

I thought it was a great add to find out that Gerard doesn't know that Frank lives in the same place as him. It's making me wonder, and now I want you to update this really really soon, because you pwn me.

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You use really good description, and everything played out in my head so perfectly.

This seemed a little bit different than your other works. I'm not sure why...it might be because it's not in first person...it's a good different, though. I really really realllyyyyyy loved this.



Love youu.
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