Pomegranate: A Hades and Persephone Tale - Comments

oh my god! Your description is... wow. Your description is amazing in this chapter, and it adds so much to what the reader pictures as they read, overall this is a stunning piece of art, great job!

I like the imagery you put within this first chapter. You painted Persephone's longing for her family and her old life was so realistic and I could almost feel her melancholic feelings flowing through me.



So I was actually thinking of commenting as I read the chapter but I found myself not being able to comment and I can't stop reading.

I like this.

No!

I LOVE this!

The whole backstory on how everything started between her and Hades really makes me want to know more!! MORE!

I hope you will continue with this story.

You definitely have to keep writing this one :)