Abashed the Devil Stood - Comments

hah, loki.. wanna take the powers from her.. something tells me he'll change his mind though..
and holy hell.. she could destroy everything?? well.. that is not good

awe steve and tony had to go back to earth and leave her there as the only mortal.. ooh with that law, I bet there's going to be some ppl being not too happy to have her there....

The beginning of this story is very interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next. I think you've done a good job with the character development and dialogue too, even though it's only the first 3 chapters. This has great potential. Please update soon. :)

Oh please do update soon! I'm very intrigued by this one can't wait to see what happens next.

@ acid_rain88
Chapter 5 and on is where you start to learn a bit more about what Fiona was doing around the Manhattan incident, but where she got it won't be answered for a while yet. I'm experimenting with the pacing so I don't put out chapters that are super long. Hopefully, the pacing works, but don't hesitate to let me know if the cliffhangers start dragging on too long. I'm still new at this :)

i really really like this so far and i'm so curious as to how she got that magic in the first place and how she now knows steve and tony

This is getting very interesting! You've got me hooked so far :) update again soon!

Amazing update:D

@ KillJoySynner There's going to be a lot more of that in the next few chapters :) Hope you continue to enjoy it!

So far, i really like it:) I'd love to read some more and how Fiona came to Asgard and how she found out about her gift, anticipating for your next update:)