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  • helena_88

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    hah, loki.. wanna take the powers from her.. something tells me he'll change his mind though..
    and holy hell.. she could destroy everything?? well.. that is not good XD
    March 28th, 2015 at 02:43pm
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    awe steve and tony had to go back to earth and leave her there as the only mortal.. ooh with that law, I bet there's going to be some ppl being not too happy to have her there....
    January 21st, 2015 at 05:43pm
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    The beginning of this story is very interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next. I think you've done a good job with the character development and dialogue too, even though it's only the first 3 chapters. This has great potential. Please update soon. :)
    December 1st, 2014 at 05:11pm
  • queencho

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    Oh please do update soon! I'm very intrigued by this one can't wait to see what happens next.
    November 2nd, 2014 at 10:06pm
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    @ acid_rain88
    Chapter 5 and on is where you start to learn a bit more about what Fiona was doing around the Manhattan incident, but where she got it won't be answered for a while yet. I'm experimenting with the pacing so I don't put out chapters that are super long. Hopefully, the pacing works, but don't hesitate to let me know if the cliffhangers start dragging on too long. I'm still new at this :)
    October 22nd, 2014 at 01:43am
  • helena_88

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    i really really like this so far XD and i'm so curious as to how she got that magic in the first place and how she now knows steve and tony Cute
    October 20th, 2014 at 12:08am
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    This is getting very interesting! You've got me hooked so far :) update again soon!
    August 22nd, 2014 at 08:40am
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    Amazing update:D
    August 20th, 2014 at 11:45pm
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    @ KillJoySynner There's going to be a lot more of that in the next few chapters :) Hope you continue to enjoy it!
    August 20th, 2014 at 11:05pm
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    So far, i really like it:) I'd love to read some more and how Fiona came to Asgard and how she found out about her gift, anticipating for your next update:)
    July 30th, 2014 at 07:23am
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