Rendering Flames - Comments

@ jamila1990
I promise it's not fake suspense lol but thanks for commenting! Happy days will eventually happen!

I forgot all about this until now lol. I'm trying to remember as I go. Separated after getting back together all this time.

@ ShadowFace
Thank you so much! And yes, I've been writing lately and even though I'm rewriting both this and the first one, I'll finish this out. Life got me busy and then I just didn't have any drive to write. I'll be sure to update soon!

Are you going to update soon? I'm like addicted to this story!

@ jamila1990
I'll continue this as I update the rewrite! It's just taking a little longer with how my schooling stuff is at the moment. But I will update, most likely within the next few days :)

This story is amazing. I hate that it stopped :(
Now I really want to know. Like is there gonna be an injection that will cure the mental state of Dahlia, or the effects of the sarin Jaden was effected with?

Id love to read the rewrite~ Will you be changing the sequel as well to fit the new story? I noticed a few inconsistencies in the first on as well and m glad you feel up to changing them. Also cant wait to see more of Marcus
And get into Jadens head a bit!! eeek
I love the title you've chosen

and Im glad you are on the right meds now! Its so frustrating when doctors have to keep playing around with dosages and prescriptions before they find one that works for you. I hope you feel better as werll

Hi! I am obsessed with this story! I hope you update soon

Great story. Read the whole prequel and this one in one day! :-)

Sarin, thats the stuff that messed with dahlia's head too right?? or the stuff that was shot at Jaden? or am I thinking of something else?

If it is the same stuff that was given to Dahlia, does that cure her? or is it a temporary cure/antidote?

-sigh- alright, you've done it, I officially like Alex -for now-

What did Jaden mean he was already exposed??

Aw man, you ha d to go and take away my alex hating fun ;-;
I cant hate her nooowww lol im glad that dahlia and her talked though
And holy wow who were those ppls that came.into the house after them, are they important?
And more importantly a DahliaxJaden moment omg!! So awkwardly perfect i loved it. Now if only theyd talk about it
Oh and will we ever find out what happened to mila and jay (because im pretty sure that theyve been gone so long tbat those arent even there names and ive failed lol)

Knew it, Totally hate "Alexandria"
Does she have any idea bout Jaden's past and who EXACTLY Dahlia is to him and how they know each other?
I'd say her worth is pretty high up there dammit
She's a bitch, I hate her lol
she said "only friend" psh maybe if she wasnt so prickly she;d have more. i wonder if she likes him or if there is something going on between them lol
and what happened to dahlia?? omg is she okay??

Knew it, Totally hate "Alexandria"
Does she have any idea bout Jaden's past and who EXACTLY Dahlia is to him and how they know each other?
I'd say her worth is pretty high up there dammit
She's a bitch, I hate her lol
she said "only friend" psh maybe if she wasnt so prickly she;d have more. i wonder if she likes him or if there is something going on between them lol
and what happened to dahlia?? omg is she okay??

Soooo, ive decided that if this alex girl is competition for Dahlia that Im going to hate her lol idc how nice of a girl she is. I just cant take any more things keeping jaden and dahlia apart! Haha especially not another girl
dammit I just want them to admit they love eaxh other already ;-; but then again its been years so that woulsnt make sense but hey an "I miss you" instead of a "have you always been this much of a prick" would be cool xD but then again that just wouldnt fit thei personalities! They always have to be hard headed and socially inept -.-
What does everyone think of her and jaden knowing each other? Did he take a new name? Because in the previous update when she said his name everyone seemes confused. Does Orson know him? If so how? What exactly is this group?
Whats wronf with Jaden though ;-; why was he shaking (think i already know, but waiting to see how this plays out) does he have any scars from whwn he got burnes and almost died in the first one book? And is he jealous of Orson? Lmao isnt orson like an older dude?
Where are the other two, I thought when everyone got seperated that they were with Jaden?? Did they die (i will sob if they did) if not, does jaden have any clues as to what happenes to then? And how is millie and orsons wofe back at the cabin?

Also, that sexual abuse chapter ;-; oh man, for some reason for all the shit she went through before dahlia was dahlia i never thought that was one of them. Poor girl. Im glad you didnt put any details in. I wouldnt jave been able to stamd reading it! Does that flash back come into play more in the future or just this chapter when she wantes to be alone because of it?

Oh boy sorry for long comment (especially since im just throwinf qiestion after question in yoyr fave lol)

-screaming-
What, how, when, why????
Jaden
Is dahlia going to be ok

Oh no whats happeni g?
Who set the trap, was it meant for Dahlia?
Was slmeone watching her this time or was she being paranoid?
And omg i.moss.Jaden and the guys
And whats happening with Millie back at the cabin?

Where's Jaden?!
Also I can't wait to see the darker side of Dahlia.

Shivers! So many mysteries!
I miss the boys though ;-;
I have theories though, so many theories
Cant wait to see if any of them pan out!
Cant wait for the next update

finished the prequel in a couple hours and now im on this one and i have to wait UGH..
LOVE IT THOUGH! UPDATE SOON

So, I'm thinking it would be cool if you dated each post like May 3rd, or something that way we know how much time you are skipping. It is still pretty easy to follow, so it really doesn't matter.

I am really happy to see this up and being written, and I can't wait to see more updates. :D It's cool that it is in Idaho right now, as I live there... haha!