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  • Dead Ocean

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    @ Laylylu

    I mean, this is really old story and I believe I was fourteen or perhaps even younger when I started writing it. I have considered re-writing it now, as I'm older and (hopefully) more skilled, I just haven't found the energy or time to do so.
    January 18th, 2018 at 06:52pm
  • Laylylu

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    Don't get me wrong, I adore the plot to this story, but I can't help but feel that it was written with a thesaurus...
    January 18th, 2018 at 05:14pm
  • Second.Heartbeat.

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    I'm pretty sure I've been reading this story since it's near infancy. Your writing is so good, and I'm so invested in this story, my heart is literally so heavy it's over. But I'm so thankful you're doing a sequel, I don't know what I would do if I had to say goodbye yet.
    August 10th, 2016 at 12:37am
  • Second.Heartbeat.

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    OH MY GOD NOOOO. You need to update soon, and make a sequel, because I don't want to say goodbye to them yet
    August 9th, 2016 at 06:32am
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    oh no, update soon
    August 9th, 2016 at 05:44am
  • catcraz826

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    I'm quite sad now. Please update soon.
    August 9th, 2016 at 04:31am
  • fienix66613

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    Well that was certainly unexpected. Update fast
    August 8th, 2016 at 11:43am
  • fienix66613

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    Awesome updates! I can't wait to see what's going to happen on Brian's birthday
    July 26th, 2016 at 06:52am
  • fienix66613

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    oh I just know Brian's parents are going to love paige. please update soon
    July 21st, 2016 at 08:06am
  • fienix66613

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    Oh god I hope Michelle ain't coming back into this picture. Anyways it was a very good chapter and I can't wait for more
    July 18th, 2016 at 08:43am
  • fienix66613

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    Good update! I need more and more and more!
    July 16th, 2016 at 01:39am
  • fienix66613

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    Loved the chapter. It was so romantic Mr. Green I hope everything is good in London!
    July 13th, 2016 at 12:18am
  • fienix66613

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    Hope u have fun in London!! Update soon as u can
    July 11th, 2016 at 02:53am
  • fienix66613

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    Awesome chapter! Keep those updates coming
    July 7th, 2016 at 10:12am
  • fienix66613

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    Grrr cliff hangers!!!! Update soon. I wanna know what goes on with this interview
    July 5th, 2016 at 07:43am
  • fienix66613

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    Jimmy sure does have perfect timing haha. Great update and please update this story and your other one as soon as possible
    July 4th, 2016 at 06:50am
  • fienix66613

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    YAY ALL IS FORGIVEN!!!! It's about damn time. God I love this story! Update soon
    July 1st, 2016 at 06:25am
  • fienix66613

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    Oooh they really need to get things back together. I just hope nothing goes wrong. Anyways update quickly
    June 29th, 2016 at 06:15am
  • fienix66613

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    I was hoping she wouldn't faint right there on stage. Awww it was such a heartwarming speech!! More please
    June 23rd, 2016 at 03:26am
  • fienix66613

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    Ooh I can't wait for the next chapter!! Update soon
    June 22nd, 2016 at 05:57am
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