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I also love how you used the third person point of view! I don't read many fics using it and I really appreciate it :) so yeah, update this whenever you can because it is really good so far :)

There is just one chapter and I really love it, I hope to read more soon :) I love Jalex fanfictions. Yours seem ver different from those I've read in the past. I love how you used them as characters in this story! It kinds of reminds me of the friendship I had with a boy before. I didn't see major spelling errors so good job! You are a really good writer:)

I am glad that you haven't forgotten this story. You don't need to rush, I just wanted to make sure you knew that at least one person wants to see what happens in this story. I am subscribed to it so I will still be here whenever you get around to it.

@ Corrupt_Perfection
Thank you for commenting, I've been slacking due to lack of feedback if I'm completely honest, it\s nice to know someone out there still cares. I haven't forgotten about this story, don\t worry, but I have literally over seventeen other stories that need updating and I've not even made a start, so I'll try to update as soon as I can

I hope you don't give up on this story, especially when it has barely started. I really want to read this, and I hope this helps inspire/motivate you to continue this.

I am looking forward to seeing where this goes.