If You're Feeling Unfaithful - Comments

This was amazing!! So sad and relatable (and hot). I love your work and this is no exception! <3 <3

@ mswrite85
Girl, you know I love you. Thank you for saying this was well put together because it was such a sudden idea and I obsessed over it for, like, five days to get it to this point. I'm honestly so glad you liked it. I WILL WORK ON A FUCKING CONTINUATION OF THIS GOOD SHIT.

@ ziramrivera18
I hope to update, and maybe even finish, some of my stories soon!! :) I'm so happy you liked this, thank you so much.

@ sodapop curtis
Girl, you're like my writing guru, I owe all this story's amazingness to YOU. God, I love you so much. I'm so glad you loved this. You're seriously the best. I don't even have words.

@ lady_enygma
God, me too. I could honestly imagine every part of this story. This entire storyline was so vivid to me!

@ birds ate my face
Oh my god thanks so much! I was so sad by the end omg I felt my heart breaking but couldn't see it going any other way. We'll see about a sequel ;)

@ Stumpslumps01
I'm thinking of new ideas for a continuation! We'll see, maybe if I can finish up another one of my stories we'll see this resurface. As long as people don't mind waiting a little while! That makes my heart swell that you called this beautiful. I'm so glad you liked it!

@ liquidsugarx0
We'll see. There's so many ways a continuation could go. I'm already getting ideas!!! Like I mentioned before, maybe if I can finish up another one of my stories soon we'll see more of this!

@ jasminewebby
Oh my god, thank you so much! It's so amazing that people really do like this. I'm blown away that you'd call me a brilliant writer--it truly means a lot. Thank you so much. I'm leaning toward continuing this, but it might be a couple weeks. We'll see :)

Oh wow that was amazing, I loved when he woke up, could picture it all in my head

"It took a couple moments to adjust, Patrick not wanting to rush, and honestly it was like they were teenagers again. Cherie kissed his collarbones and traced his vertebrae with her middle finger. Her touch was electric against his skin, giving his body new life."

oh my gosh I just love those lines together because you don't really see writers take advantage of the symbolism and beauty of a "first time" y'know what I mean? Most of the time everything goes perfect like it's a porno. I love that they're nervous like a couple of teenagers, it just makes their innocence shine in such an immoral situation. Neither of them are cut out for this.

the line about how she didn't know he wore glasses honestly tore me up inside because it's very clear they connected and shared something rare, but she still doesn't know all that much about him, and it's heartbreaking because she never will.

"But when the smoke faded, the smell of sulfur still lingering, the reality of the situation was present. Patrick had a wife."

UGH I LOVE THAT LINE LIKE WHY, WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME

I think itss perfect the way it is. Thank you so much for this :) I can't wait for the other stories you have (please update soon!) <3

my god woman. that was painfully beautiful. the metaphors, the heart break, the leaving - everything. very well put together and i'm gonna scream this out loud...

FUCKING MAKE A CONTINUATION OF THIS GOOD SHIT!!

I would absolutely love it if you continued this! It's crazy amazing. You're such a brilliant writer!! I love how they're both written. If you choose not to continue this, that's alright c: but if you do decide to continue it, you won't find me complaining! (:

pleasepleaseplease continue this! it's already fantastic with this ending but it would be wonderful to see how far this could go!!!

Please continue it was beautiful! Maybe they are destined to be together?

SEQUEL PLEASE! That was fucking amazing, I teared up at the end, oh my gosh it was great!

"a brick tied to him dragging him down"



gurl, you know I love this story. I was so excited to read the missing pieces you left out, and you didn't disappoint! I know I said this already, but, god, I love the imagery in this and how I can perfectly picture all their slow, deliberate movements. I especially love Patrick's dialogue and how he's just letting it all out as it's pent up over however long his marriage has lasted. I can't wait to read the next part

really great. can't wait for the next chapter!

Aw fuck yeah. Not so perfect Patrick stories are hard to come by I'm stoked

i love that you've put Patrick in this position. It's different, and refreshing to see

I'm in love with this! It's perfect!!

Excellent first part!! I am waiting for part two! Hopefully soon you can post it!!

Yeah! That header was (no words)!!!! Please post the first chapter. Pretty pretty pleaseeee

Yeah! That header was (no words)!!!! Please post the first chapter. Pretty pretty pleaseeee

OH, homegirl. Don't play with my emotions. I love a deceitful Patrick every now and then... :D POST THE FIRST CHAPTER UP, DANGIT!

Pwease? With Patrick on top? ;)