The Other Woman - Comments

PLEASE UPDATE SOON THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!!!

Shit is about to hit the fan!! I can't wait to see what happens next.

i can't wait to keep reading, this is super interesting and different.
update soon!

I'm really curious how this all plays out.update soon

uPDATE YAAAAAAAS
I saw you updated and lef out a war cry of excitement.

@ foREVer-a-creature
Thank you! We love you too!

I can't wait to see (well read) the damage Brandon done. Judy is right though. Ricky and Jessica haven't officially broke up and it would be wrong of Judy and Malia to make her feel like they do because they are using Ricky to get back at Chris. I never really thought of Jessica, but now I kinda feel bad. I can't wait for Malia's next chapter to see what happened between her and Josh. I know she said second base, but I don't really know what that includes. Anyways, great update as always ladies! I love you both.

...Chris deserves that shit. Go Brandon! XD haha. Next update should be interesting as hell.

@ foREVer-a-creature
Thank you so much for your comment. I love writing this story too. Believe me when I say Judy and Malia are just getting started.

I can't tell you ladies how much I love this story. It portrays Chris as an average guy, that is a total asswipe. I love how he thinks that Judy and Malia won't find out about each other. The plan they came up with was funny as hell. I lost it when Chris came in and it looked like Judy was sucking Rick's dick. Then when Chris gets to Malia's house, she's is topless and all over Josh. I think it's great that he is getting a taste of his own medicine. I love this update so fucking much.

Usually I hate stories where they play a person unrealistically (like Chris, because he seems like such a sweet guy), but reading this makes you forget about Chris on stage or in interviews and see him as a just a regular asshole guy.
Your writing is vivacious, and you perfect the whole concept like that movie 'The Other Woman'; where I assume you got the idea from? Hence the title.
Can't wait for an update, really love this story so far.

Oh my god I am sooooo excited for this!!!!!! I just watched John Tucker Must Die and this story is kind of like it so I am excited to see where it will go!