In Exchange for Magic - Comments

i just read the story "in exchange for magic" one. and
AWHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
he sacrificed his powers for her?! and AWHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SO SWEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTT
xP. i wish you'd make a sequel or something, but that would ruin the point. but still <3
well. yeah. hahah. i have some random urge to say something like "YOU HAVE ALL MY SUPPORT, GENERAL" to you. HAHAHAHAH. yeah. i'm lame :]
i can't wait until i read your other stories! ^^

I love your stories!!! I first saw them on quizilla as Ms.Snickers...I loved Robin Hood in New York!! You are an awsome writer!!

I really like your storie! keep writing more:D

I have mono, so I'm obsessively reading through your stories, and I couldn't get Ez out of my head so.. that was my first pick. After the TLTL update, that is (which the cliffhanger is KILLING ME, by the way!) . Anyhoo, in Chapter 5 I noticed a whoopsie that I kept coming back to, so I figured I'd let you know... In the following sentences, you use Ez's name before we actually find out what his name is...

"I sat down on the ground and tucked the skirt of my dress between my legs. Ez breathed a long sigh and sat across from me, his back against the trunk of a tree.

"You know I don't like being called Sully," he said after a moment, his voice sounding surprisingly like a bullied child."

Gawd, if I was in the mood I'd go all fawning fangirl on you, but I'm tired and watching Dragonball, so I won't.
Iloveyou. :]

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! :D i read this on quizzila along time ago and have been wanting to read it since then but i never could remember the name!!! I finaly found it hehe im soooo happy!!! :}

Awesome story. i really liked it. The one before it was great too. No offense but i still dont get what is in the locket and its eating me up.

scenariodreamer

BEST STORY IVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT!!!!
WAT WAS IN THE LOCKET?? PLEASE TELL ME
IWENT BACK TO PAGE 48 BUT I CUDNT COME TO ANYTHING CONCLUSIVE.
well GREAT story!!!!

oh please tell me what was in the locket! I bet it was Rose but I want to make sure =) oh and now I'm moving on to the next story lol part way through this marathon

favorite qoute from chapter 38

Little voice: Sophie... You should walk to Gui's and play another prank on him!
Me: No... I couldn't!
Little voice: He won't find out, Sophie!
Me: I'm not worried about him finding out, I'm just too lazy to walk to his house.
Little voice: Oh. Okay. How about you just call him pretending to be on fire?
Me: Okay!

I did. He didn't believe me. I'm still bored.

Did he seriously think I was going to burn the place down just by touching something. this reminded me of Cal =3 and a full moon can be really bright. Where I live it is really bright and its so cool to be outside at night! its like a white sun that shines blue light.

I have decided to qoute things in chapters.

"I can't believe this! You can fly!"
"No, I can't!" Ez protested. "I was simply manipulating the wind through the oxygen released by the trees-"
"Oh my Lord! I know a boy who can fly!" I cried, throwing my head back and yelling into the sky. "Eat your heart out, Peter Pan!"

and I just went outside, cuz it's midnight to smell what it smells like. lol

haha I like this sotry =3 this is maybe the fourth time I've read it lol

"I'm not sure you do. How long have we been walking again? Five hours? Six?"
"Two."
"Close enough, Sully. Close enough."
"Don't call me Sully!"

ok, so i was reading this story on quizilla before the switch over, and then had comp problems that made me abandon its reading, and i want to say that i'm reeaaalllyyy glad i finally got a chance to finish this story. i loved every minute of it, not that i expected anything less, because all off your stories are amazing. i'm fairly certain now, though, that ez is my favorite character that you have written -- i just can't help but love him! :P :D

oh my goodness, I gave up sleep to finish this and I love sleep.
loved it!

I love this story =3 it made me laugh, I think it actually made me cry, and I kinda wish it didn't end =x I'm glad I got a mibba so I could read your stories, I followed u from quizille =P

Wow .. it's sad ... this story has been over for just about ever and ... I've been subscribed all this time ... hmm .. just thought I'd share that little bit of stupidness, and remention how much I loved it ...... =D

I love it! but it's so sad that it's over... but i still loved it!

IT'S OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Aw, now you have to start something else, please!!!!
I'm going to miss Ez....*sniff*

Devendra:

I saw once that you are currently in college, majoring in creative writing?

Ack! I'm not in college! I'm only sixteen! I go to a magnet school for the arts... I just live in dorms because I live too far away to go home except on the weekends sometimes. :P

Oh my good golly gosh, Sophie I absolutely adore this story from the depths of my soul.
Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for creating Ez and Rose. What an astonishing... just... amazing... ABSOLUTELY terrificly spectacular beyond all shadow of a doubt.
That was one of the most amazing, suspenseful, scary, enlightening, heart-warming stories that I've ever read on the internet. Admirable writing, I can't even begin to explain.
I was actually told to read this by a friend in my Geometry class, oh my gosh I am so glad that I listened.
I saw once that you are currently in college, majoring in creative writing? I'm not sure if this is current, since it said The Dark Knight came out, hehe. Amazing movie, by the way. Heath did a wonderful job.
Uhm, kind of strange to ask in a comment, considering I don't even know if you check these anymore, much less reply.
Do you have any recommendations for college courses? I write, like you do, about creative things... and I wanted to go into that for my future. I don't know what kind of advice you could give me, or whatever, but I was just curious.
Such a tantalizing writer as yourself must have something to say.
:)
Please reply, thank you for writing this SPECTACULAR read, and may your life play out the way you wish it!
---Mika Belland, 15-year-old freak.