Cursed - Comments

How is this already finished?!??! The way you developed Loki and Zara's relationship was so damn good; the right amount of apathy and obvious buried love. We both know how I feel about casual emotionless sex so I was already on their side Seriously though, I was kind of shocked when they managed to kill Thor. I just can't picture it because he's the good guy and all, but it suited the story I'm really going to miss this being updated, but it was very, very good and I'm sure I'll re-read it at some point. Beautiful work, Nicole.

o: I like this. Your detail is very nice, and I love how you write the characters. You're doing awesome!

I really liked seeing Zara's attachment to her home in this chapter. It was very sweet and really showed some of her vulnerability - adds to her character.
Typical Loki "dying" and using magic I shouldn't even be surprised any more but I couldn't help it. You write him so well with all of his arrogance

Can't wait for more

Zara is so badass. Like I can't really say much else about this chapter because the badassery was just unparalleled.

And the take-over starts! Loki's so typically dramatic about it all, it's quite funny. Zara's almost like the voice of reason.

I love that you included Loki's mother! His love for her was my favourite part of his character, and the fact that Zara's already been let in on that a little is a good sign.
Great as usual!

I'm not sure if that binding ceremony was supposed to have this effect, but wow was that hot

So much set-up for drama! Malekith, Thor, Odin...exciting!

Ooh, I like this. I really like this. Your descriptions of everything is great and I really liked how Malekith woke Zara. It was very cool.

I can't help but be suspicious of Loki but at the same time, I really hope that this all works for Zara's sake. It's so interesting and you need to write more!!!