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  • Dreamuser

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    Hey, I just read this story, and I loved it. :) Surprisingly enough, I don't really feel sad about the ending. I mean, it's pretty realistic, and you didn't write it in a "sob story" way, which is really cool, and i don't know, I just feel that even after everything, they kind of ended it with no real hard feelings, which is really nice. I guess I just find this story really charming because of their attitudes. :)
    March 8th, 2016 at 08:44pm
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ helenaisacat
    Thank you! I figured a sad ending would be more realistic for Alex's sexuality -- don't want to make anything too cliche.
    December 6th, 2014 at 10:57pm
  • ForgottenYouth

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    i love this story, and i'm kinda glad that it didn't have a happy ending because it's original and the world needs more stories with sad endings!! c:
    December 6th, 2014 at 07:14pm
  • theedgeoftonight

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    Yeah, I get you - congrats for keeping it realistic!
    August 18th, 2014 at 01:20am
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ alltimeh1gh
    Ahhhh I'm sorry, I know everyone wanted them together but I wants to keep t realistic, which is totally frustrating for me too!
    August 17th, 2014 at 01:08am
  • theedgeoftonight

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    Aww man I loved it but IT WAS SO INFURIATING THE ENDING I KNOW I SHOULD UNDERSTAND ALEXS POV BUT I WAS ROOTING FOR JACK THE WHOLE TIME OH MANNNNN
    August 17th, 2014 at 01:05am
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ kickthepj
    eeeep i'm glad you liked it, that means a lot! Thank you!
    August 11th, 2014 at 02:44am
  • kickthepj

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    i was so happy with this because the whole thing is just so far from any cliches and i love that, i didn't want some overused office sex plot you know? and then there was like the plot twist with zack and then things were so good and fucking hot might i say but um. now they're not. everything's sad and i kind of really love sad stories tbh but god just. i'm going on and on, aren't i? basically, i really really very much like this thanks & goodbye
    August 11th, 2014 at 02:25am
  • JamieAllOver.

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    i'm laughnig thats how all my things are
    actually mine don't even crash
    they just kinda combust where they are
    August 10th, 2014 at 10:45pm
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    Not sure tbh
    I'll probs abandon it
    Damn this oneshot has crashed and burned I knew I shoulda had a happy ending
    August 10th, 2014 at 10:41pm
  • JamieAllOver.

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    idk what you mean "not really" to tbh
    and idk what to tell ya man
    but i just noticed you made an lj and i just
    why
    August 10th, 2014 at 10:08pm
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    uh
    not really
    it feels more like a hard bruise now
    fucking weird
    August 10th, 2014 at 03:49am
  • JamieAllOver.

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    @ jalex_barakarth3012
    bc u seemed content enough with rian's answer and since she p much studied to be a nurse before quitting i figured it'd be good enough???
    and any average person, after like two weeks, would say "hm maybe i should talk to a professional about this"??????
    it's not that hard i just????
    talk to your sister about it if your mum's just gonna freak about it idk man there has to be at least one older woman you know and trust well enough to discuss it with that isn't me
    August 10th, 2014 at 03:39am
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    also what the hell happened to asking your grammy about it wtf
    August 10th, 2014 at 03:30am
  • jalex_barakarth3012

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    @ JamieAllOver.
    aren't you hilarious
    idk how to bring it up?????
    August 10th, 2014 at 03:28am
  • JamieAllOver.

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    my dick's longer than it is
    ba dum tss
    but i told u to see a dr and u didn't wanna listen that ain't my fault
    August 10th, 2014 at 03:18am
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    @ JamieAllOver.
    funny bc now it hurts
    no but it felt so short when i was rereading it omg it's so weird
    August 10th, 2014 at 03:09am
  • JamieAllOver.

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    this is less than 12000 words and i'm concerned r u sick is it that thing we talked about maybe u should just see a dr already
    August 10th, 2014 at 03:06am