Hold on Me - Comments

I just... gah her and Ryan are so cute LOL I want a divorce.

I can't wait for more of this!

Paige is literally an angel lol.

Those two girls have the cutest friendship ever I swear.

Awe! I want a best friend like Zoey LOL

Ha. Got it all done in one night. Lol. Seriously though, just epic. You guys are doing great and I love love love IT. I can't wait for the next update!!!

What an excellent chapter to come back to!

Yay, she's coming to Atlanta!

"Trust me, it's better if we go to them. You do not want Danny and Boze in here. Someone will end up in the hospital." <-- my favorite line of the whole thing. I'm really happy that everything seems to be going well, but if I know you, you're gonna pop my happy bubble with glee.

So you already know how much I love this but I'm gonna tell you again, I LOVE THIS! I especially love amusement park chapters so this was a particular favorite.

“I think my ovaries are dead.”

“I told you.”

“No, seriously…I think I lost something during the show.”

^^ My absolute favorite lines!

I really like this! I can't wait to see more!

@ Deadlihood

That, my dear, is called revenge.

Oh lordy, I can already tell this story is going to be the death of me.

@ Deadlihood

Whoops! Sorry!

So I'm a little put out that you didn't tell me you were starting to post this, but I'm so excited for this story that I'll let it slide lol. I can't wait to read more of this