Oh wow... And the story unfolds, as they say. Everything is perfectly described, emotions and dialog for a scene like this are all spot on, you didn't have any wallowing or pull the 'feel sorry for me' card that is used in a lot of verbal and physical abuse chapters in other stories, you made Tash come out strong and hopefully it will all work out for them. They've come too far to let a wedge come between them :) Tre, he did the right thing, well at least trying to tell Billie before he was attacked. I just love this chapter how it all comes to one thing, how at the end of the day they still love each other and nothing, not even this could seperate them. Update soon! Looking forward to it :)
Holy s**t! The chick's back and TASH AND TRÉ KISSED! I'm freaking out, because Tré and Tash would be cool together BUT! With all the relationships at stake? Update soon!
Wow, just... Wow. I am once again astounded with your writing, the drama is all perfect, however still sad, I feel bad for Mike, and not at all for Sarah now. Because she should have known if she was marrying a rockstar he wouldn't be there every second. So she's the badguy to me now. Love how you wrote this one, looking forward to the next. Took me forever to read it, I was in the middle of the woods for two days XD Anyways, as always, looking forward to update! :)
So many silent readers, eh? Haha. I never mentioned it before, but I keep forgetting to tell you that I love the layout. The colors go together nicely- anyways! I like the new drama between Mike and Sarah, hopefully things work out. I will admit, I love how you've written Sarah as a character. When she was first introduced, I had my reservations about a wrist slashing high-school drop out for Mike, but she has evolved, and now I can't see anything I really dislike about her now. Loved the chapter, it was sweet. update soon. :)
I laughed when Tash slapped Tré xD and then later he's like “Before you slap the living daylights out of me again...” and then she saved Tré from the pool. Which makes Tash's character that much more badass, even though she was pissed at Tré, she still jumped in and saved him. Loving the story, update soon
Tash went back!!!! Awesome, I exhaled a sigh of relief when she reveals it's time to go back. Hopefully that's all in the past now, but I've got concerns about Billie's 'girlfriend'. Though she only said a handful of words in the whole chapter, it still makes one wary. And after reading a story like this, Billie almost becomes like a brother, so you just want what's best for him. I'm curious of how everyone will react to her return, hopefully it'll be all good, though I'm sure Mike and Tre can't be entirely forgiving to her since she put Billie through all of that, yet I go back and fourth between them, Tash left for good reason, Billie was hurting for good reasons, too. I understand her side entirely, she wanted Billie to move on and find someone the fans would like, in reality, if Tash was with Billie Joe, I'd love her to pieces (Even though I do love Adie) Looking forward to next update. :)
Oh wow... Billie was in the hospital, Mike found Tash and Tre showed his "Don't fuck with my best friend" attitude, another awesome chapter, as always. I'm looking forward to the next update,
Oh man, I'm torn between the two. Tash being mad at Billie and then Billie sinking into depression. And may or may not be slitting his wrists, could just be the bandages on his hand from punching the mirror. Everything is coming together nicely, I'm wondering if she will go back to Billie. Story's looking good, looking forward to next update!
@ WhereMyDemonsHide I knew you would have loved this chapter, I hope you went crazy when you read it. A new chapter will be up soon don't worry. Hope you loved it, what was your fav part?
OH MY GOD IM PANICKING. Billie thinks Tash cheated on him, fans are after Tash and everything is going to shit, man... I feel bad for her. It just never stops, wonder where she's going or if Billie will come after her. I love the chapter and it's drama regardless. UPDATE QUICKLY D:
Thank you,I was really trying to show how this September month still affect's Billie emotionally but when I wrote it I had no idea how to make it hit it's climax until I had a brain buzz when I was having a fight and going through a hard time with my boyfriend but I am glad you enjoyed it :)