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I love the way you write, that epilogue was beautiful, all the ideas about moving on, of remembering but not dwelling. It was wonderful. You are amazing :D Thanks for writing that.

Wow. This story was amazing. I can't remember a time when I cried so much as when I read the last two chapters(not counting the epilogue). You are a great writer and I can't wait to read the rest of your stories.

Wow, I can't believe I never got around to reading all those last fun filled, action packed, adventure chapters. I am so sorry.

I missed all the wonderful bits about the rebellion, I loved his nervousness about convincing them, of Harriet's mother burdening her problems on her without a second thought. I love how Kaleb decided he was going to help though, how determined he was, how much he really is like prince charming. He's a great character, though a bit twisted, but we love him for it not because of it.

Though why did you have to kill her? That was horrible, they were so in love, so perfect together, surely you could have allowed them that? That made me very sad. I did not like.

But I love this story, I love the way you write it. I love how for that chapter that they merged, that the reality and fantasy were so close and it was like a narrator in his head. But it stopped.

And all that grieving, all that pain. And finally he tells the truth. I loved what Doctor Murphy replied with, those were some good lines.

And finally, he can write again. Thank god. I wouldn't want to see him suffer anymore, his fantasy is his escape, and he should be allowed that. At least.

One good word for Harriett and he follows his dreams, isn't that nice? It's good to see him doing something with his amazing talent, I can't wait to see what type of things they will make him write.

Awww, a love story too! What more could you ask for? I like that Kaleb said that he liked Harriet because of her annoyingness and not despite of it, lol.

And he joined the rebellion because of his love for Harriett! Surely that is saying something, this woman is a master of her art, in both worlds indeed. She has such a way with words, it's beautiful.

And he defeated the leader so quickly, he is truly going to be a force to reckon with, bring on the strategy and the plans and the bringing down of the government, he'll breeze through those and still have a chance to woo Harriett.

Oh, it was so interesting. I love how life is seeming to imitate art in this, though it wasn't the rebellion that made her so different, it was the alcohol. Where had dearest Harriet been all those days?

Silly Kaleb, why do you deny yourself love?! Though we learn more now, her name was Leonora, and he couldn't say it then, could he say it now? I love how he denies his feelings so adamantly. And perhaps that is what the Rebellion is, it is love, and all he has to do is rebel, fall into her arms, and everything will be perfect :D

God, I love this story. More soon!

"Ladies and gentleman let me introduce you to a little thing I am not so familiar with, but fear it with all my heart: the almighty writer’s block. It’s inevitable, like a disease: nobody wants it, but unfortunately and eventually we have to face it."

Amen, sister, amen.

You know I will enjoy this story which ever way you take it, though the character of Kaleb is so well formed anyway it doesn't matter who's name or who's appearance he has.

Writer's block is a right ass, I know, I've had it for nearly five months now, when my computer died so did my ideas. I feel his pain (and yours). But I do miss the city and I do hope we get the delve into Kaleb the Slitter's world a little more next chapter.

i like the new directionof the story. you really are an amazing writer.
lol if i were Kaleb i would find Harriet to be the single most annoying person ever. and for some reason, that makes me more intrested in how their relationship will pan out.

i think that you should do the one you like better because in my opinion, writing is mainly all about the author. it's there story and their mind. you do what you want. i'm going to read it regardless

Just do whatever is easier for you. I love the story, and I won't stop reading no matter what. I do think you should leave this one up, however, and just post the new one as well.

Hm... Personally, I think it would be somewhat better if you reposted it...

Oie I don't know what to tell you. I like the story the way it is, but if it's easier on you, then you can repost it, but.... I do like the story.....

Fun update. :D

I seriously cannot get over your descriptive skills. I can picture Muoia Nell'Aria in my mind almost perfectly. I was give my left arm to have an ounce of your talent.

This is well on its way to becoming one of my favorite stories.

Great job. Seriously.

holy crap man, i freaking love this story!!

This is brilliant! I love it. :D

hmmmm.... Lovely. the story is very carefully developed. I shall subsribe and wait not-so-paciently for an update. :)

Your writing always rocks my socks, in the nicest way possible.

So how far is this fictional world going to melt into the real? Will this be one of your beautiful supernatural stories I almost live for?

His writing skills (your writing skills, lol) are amazing, such description you could only wish for. That's what I love about your stories, they're real, they're loved, not just a way to past time or a comment competition. Heart and soul, am I right?

Wow. I'm not sure what else to say. You have AMAZING description skills, and this story is extremely creative.

Great job. I'll be looking out for more.