Secret - Comments

HI SORRY THIS IS REALLY LATE but I loved this. I agree with the comment below, like this entire one shot is a secret in itself because the readers have no idea who Ani is. I like how it ended and I like that you may not continue this because it leaves soooo much up to imagination. It's the perfect balance of the information you need to know and the information you don't need to know, because it definitely keeps the reader hooked.

This was great!

I think this a perfect personification of a secret! You know someone has a secret, and you're curious about it but you're also annoyed that no one will tell you the secret, so then it is just kind of taunting you. I don't know if that was your intention when writing this, but it really works so well! The writing is really well done and I really enjoyed the idea behind this. I really think this would work well as a longer story, though it's still great as a one-shot. The secret is still taunting me.

It would definitely be interesting to see how everything would play out. To know more about Evan, this mysterious Ani, and the secret. But again, very intriguing piece that I really enjoyed reading!