Triumph - Comments

I love Eric! He is my favorite character from the Divergent Series and obviously Jay Courtney portraying him is just a huge plus and turn on. Why are you not updating this amazing story? I haven't read a good Eric story in a long time, and here we don't get to see a lot of these. I love it so far because it tells me they are hiding something very interesting.

I noticed few grammar errors but nothing major. I wasn't distracted or bothered by them. Please, update soon. Rec'd/Commented and Subscribed!

Can't wait for the next chapter to be up :D Editing stuff is hard but this story so far is good, only one chapter but yeah. I like how it read easily, I want to know more about Isobel and wonder if she'll choose a new name for her self once she is in dauntless or if she'll keep her given name. I was actually surprised that her mother was supportive of her choosing that life. Update soon! I can't wait to read what happens!

awww don't end this now! it's so good! a sequel would be amazing! xx

You should do one more follow up chapter to show where they are after the war. I really love this story though.

I love this chapter I love how you are keeping the hard bad boy side of Eric but little pieces of his soft side are poking through every once and awhile. I can't wait for the update!!!

LOVE THIS! UPDATE SOON!

I love dominant jealous eric! A love triangle is always interesting as well. Really looking forward to the next update, hopefully soon.

first divergent fanfiction i've read and i'm not dissapointed! love it! update soon! xx

@ EmzyStilinski
I know, I was actually questioning if I could turn it into a Will romance..
Let me know when yours is up and running, I'll read it!
I'm planning a Will romance when I finish this

I don't know if I can read this because of Will.....
I literally just posted a blog about him.

I am going to keep reading though.

(Now I have to make a happy Will story)

So happy I found this story, I love Will and Eric haha I can't wait to read more!

I am hanging on to each and every last word. I can't wait for an update!!!

Ahhh loved the new chapter! And i love how you incorporated the movie because honestly their are some lines in the movie that just define the characters better. Doing great <3

@ ace merrill.
I have to admit, I cried when I read the book
My partner is reading the books, and last night he got upset about a character that was killed off..

Aww, poor Isobel. And the whole hand thing with Will was so cute.
I honestly cried when I read the book, he was a favorite of mine too!

@ shaylean
Aww thanks, next chapter is all up for you :-) Hopefully next one won't be far away..

Loving it so far! Keep it up (=

I love the story! I can't wait to see what happens during her time in Dauntless and with Eric. Post more soon!

Everyone thinks I'm crazy for thinking Eric is gorgeous... he's the hottest guy in the movie, though!

Seriously, though. Everyone thinks I'm crazy for thinking Eric is gorgeous... he's the hottest guy in the movie, though!