August 20th, 2014 at 11:31pm
Let me start off by saying I was on the verge of tears through the whole thing. I really liked it a lot.
When I first started reading it I wasn't sure what Josh was upset about - I thought Oli had cheated on him or something. When you said that they pulled up to the cemetery my heart sunk. It's been a long time since I've read a fic that made me so upset and that stands out with your story.
The addition of the death of their "to be adopted" baby was terribly upsetting too.
I think cutting right to the after-life scene when Josh was committing suicide was a good transition. And I especially loved how at the end Josh and Oli were back together.
Overall, I really was impressed with this fic. I really liked it and I won't soon forget it.
Yay that makes me SO happy!!
Well, any good comments like that make me happy XDXD