i've just read all 6 chapters and i really like it. I love how detailed all the chapters are, it makes you feel like you are actually with them. And my compliments to you on your writing it's definitely improved/more matured.
I like the interactions between Rebecca and Adrian it made me smile a few times. I love Adrian, i like how protective he is of Rebecca. And correct me if i'm wrong but i kinda got the feeling that he is more of a quite/calm kind off person but that's oke because i liked that about him. I'm not sure if i like Rebecca but i don't hate her either, i guess she has to grown on me.
I love how detailed all the chapters are, it makes you feel like you are actually with them.
And my compliments to you on your writing it's definitely improved/more matured.
I like the interactions between Rebecca and Adrian it made me smile a few times. I love Adrian, i like how protective he is of Rebecca. And correct me if i'm wrong but i kinda got the feeling that he is more of a quite/calm kind off person but that's oke because i liked that about him.
I'm not sure if i like Rebecca but i don't hate her either, i guess she has to grown on me.
So this means you've got another fan/follower