This is so great! I love that you took something as simple as being stuck in traffic, and used metaphors about driving to tie this into the relationship. Definitely a different approach, and very well done! I really enjoyed how this was written-- I haven't read many stories that are written in this style (referring to someone as 'you' in the narration) and you really pulled it off well. I really think that you did Schrödingerian Love justice and I truly enjoyed reading this! Great job!
September 21st, 2014 at 06:11am