Devil in I - Comments

Ok, first I was squealing over Piccolo coming into the chapter and then I just had a complete mindfuck over Frieza's hidden powers. Like damn, Stevie! How do you come up with this stuff? I always knew Frieza had some sort of weird mental powers. I can't wait for the next chapter. Take your time with it though.

@ Albluerose

About 4-5 hours away. Haha.

Soooo
When's the next chapter??? Lol

@ Albluerose

I plan to delve into this in the next chapter and the answers will come shortly after that. Sorry for keeping it in the dark so long

Thanks for all your comments, it's means a lot. :)

How is frieza doing this??? I can't wait to see where things go with vegeta and bulma! :) great work.

I am in love with this story and I can't wait for the next update :)

UPDATTTTTEEE!! Idk anything, just update!! Wth is going on?! Stevie update!!

Anyway, this was such an awesome update ^_^ :D

Holy. Shit. Frieza's hurting everyone through Vegeta's dreams?

Holy crap!

@ Proud Saiyan Warrior
Yayy! Okies! :D

@ Tipsy Returns

I plan n updating shortly, just swamped with stuff atm, haha. ^.^

HaHa! I just read all three chapters again! This is so cool <3 Why aren't you updating? But, but, since I didn't comment after chapter 3 before, let me tell you, Bulma was so much in character this time! And so was Vegeta! Loved it <3 And his dream... it must be either Bulma or Trunks as super saiyan. Vege is such an idiot haahaha Update soon!

Candy bowl!!!! So I don't usually read stories like this, but I have seen Dragon Ball Z before and man, that was a great show. And I really did like this!! I thought it was cool how it was kinda sci-fi in a way but also stayed true to the origin. It wasn't hard to understand, which can happen when you read a story that's about a fandom you're not familiar with, and I really enjoy where it's going. Great job!

I bet he dreamed of bulma!!! Great update

This is so awesome. I love Bulma and Vegeta! Almost as much as I love Pan and Trunk together hehehe can't wait for more!

@ Proud Saiyan Warrior
Anything for a Saiyan! And man you really work so hard!

@ Tipsy Returns
I've always loved Vegeta/Bulma relationship fics, they just work so well together! I thought it was time I stopped reading them and wrote my version of it :D

I've got another update ready, just fixing up a few bits :D

Haha, I spend all day getting myself into character for writing as Vegeta. I stand in front of the mirror and glare and then I walk around speaking like he would, it's really hilarious, my boyfriend thinks im nuts, haha. Plus, listening to dark music helps get me in the zone. He's the character I identify most with in DBZ, so it felt only fitting to revolve this story around him and bulma.

Yeah, you're right, I am starting out portraying her as a weak chick, but her classic Bulma attitude appears in the next update I promise! :D

Thanks for taking the time to read this, It means a lot to me and it's really inspiring to hear your feedback <3

Hey my Proud Saiyan Warrior!

OMG I love you for writing this! Ever since I saw the series, especially the part when Vegeta and Bulma were stuck on Namek together for a while, I wanted them together! Like almost wished! And when future Trunks told Goku that Bulma was his mom, I was like *on cloud nine* haha

And I've been wanting to read why and how they came together...they're such opposite souls! There is my reason for loving you! You're writing this, and you're amazing! You're simply doing a wonderful job! Just update very very soon!

Btw, especially loved this line - He stood, scrunching up his nose at the awful smell that wafted in with her, clinging to her body like a cloak. 'Damn humans and their need of spray on fruits, it should be a crime'. Haha So Vegeta-ish. You portrayed his character so well! But Bulma seemed a bit week, but she's actually a fighter, right? Let's see more of her fire in the upcoming chapters!

So happy to have read this. Love you! This is so amazing! Keep up the excellent work! Definitely recc'ing and sub'ing!

On a side note, the layout is absolutley gorgeous!

@ Cyber Hina
Thank You so much, I'll get onto that!

@ Albluerose
Thanks

I'm do a little bit of pointing out spelling errors. I apologize in advance if this seems nitpicky. When you write a word like moment's, it means it's a possessive noun or something. Like usually moment's would be translated as Moment is. I suggest taking out the apostrophe to clear up the confusion and to make the sentence flow better.

Aside from what I pointed out, I love this story and can't wait til you update it! :D