Another amazing piece by you and I am not disappointed. I love the way you wrote this, it's written a bit differently in a way, from what I'm used to. But I am definitely not complaining! I like that it's not overly graphic or not graphic enough. It's somehow somewhere in the middle, but you made your own and it just works so well. I loved everything about it, from them just laying in bed and briefly playing "fuck, marry, kill," to the dialogue between them, and the imagery. Within those scenes, you painted them so well. You made me as a reader really imagine it and let me paint it in my mind. You gave me the tools and I painted, I appreciate that. Most of the times, other writers just dig right into it and don't let the reader really get the opportunity to envision the scene in their minds, so I appreciate you for that. And I loved the ending, John definitely had it coming! Great work as always!!
July 14th, 2018 at 04:15am
