Farm House - Comments

WowowwowwwoooooWww this is so good I love the idea and I love the way this is written. Omfg I don't think I can wait for this to be updated.

This is insanely good.

@ JagkBarafag
And I typoed explore lol. You're welcome :).

@ NephthysPhoenix
True. Thank you lol. You're very helpful :).

@ JagkBarafag
I had to read them for a book club I joined :). This is how I see it, the writer needs to feel comfortable on what he and she prefers for their own writing style. It's ok to step out of your comfort zone and explore new things. So whatever you choose is your decision alone :).

@ jagkbaralex
Aw thank you for giving it a chance <3 lol.

I didn't think I'd like this, but it's really intriguing. Subscribed. (:

@ Eggrollz193
Why thaaaank you. I'm already getting emotionally attached to Evan like what am I gonna do with that little guy ;-;

@ NephthysPhoenix
I'll have to read them maybe I'll be inspired for different things in this <3

Also, I want your opinion on how I should write it ;-; lololol.

I can't blame them for feeling this way since humans became more of a monster then they already are. You should read The house of the scorpion and The Lord of opium. This sort reminds me of those two books. They are both an interesting read. Also, it's your story. Write it However you want.

This is a seriously amazing idea! I'm already getting emotionally attached to the story and how everyone's reacting to Alex interests me and ugh. This is amazing, thank you so much for making this c:

@ NephthysPhoenix
Why thank you <3

Interesting start and idea! Can't wait for more :).

@ MandiCX
Hahahaha. I will update as soon as possible <3

Please update soon I know it's only been one chapter but this story already has my heart

@ heroes.
Wow I was not expecting this long of a comment and it's amazing.

The way the boys are treated is mostly based off how actual animals are treated in a lot of slaughter houses. I'm a really big animal person and think it's disgusting how people treat animals. I mean I get needing food or whatever (although we could all go vegan) but really do you need to treat animals so bad just because they're gonna die anyways? Shouldn't you make their last few years good instead of bad?

I thought showing Alex was actually nice and not just one of those people who sit back and feel bad, but also show that they care. Also I think Alex interacting with a little baby boy is just soooooo cute it makes me feel all adorable inside <3 lol.

Jack is definitely pissed being labeled as a feral. I mean, they all are human after all and being treated like animals is pretty shitty. Jack's probably the most aggressive one in there because he needs nice, fun people to pay attention to him, not being separated and unable to talk to anyone all day.

I'm glad you think my ideas are frightening but different <3 that's exactly what I want lololol. I think there will be a lot of great things to come for this :)

The way these boys are treated just. It's absolutely awful, the poor babies. It make me sick, how people can just go with it and move on with life like they're not ruining someone else's. It hurts my heart. I really hope Alex gets the chance to shut this shit down, because nope.

When Alex was being nice to one of the little ones, Evan, the smile on my face was incredible. The little boy even smiled a bit, oh my gosh, how must he feel to be treated with a bit of kindness for once? The moment ended too soon because of Zack and their "duties" and just fuck, let's just cuddle all the poor babies, because they don't deserve to be treated that way, not at all.

And dude, being labeled feral, I don't blame him. If I was in his position, I probably would be to, because leave me alone (then again i'm a scared little thing i couldn't do anything haha) and if they wanted to treat me this way, I wouldn't make shit easier for them, that's for sure.

I really like this idea, it's different and a little frightening and I love that. This is gonna be great, I can already tell, and I can't wait to see what you've got in store!