I love it! Seriously. Like how it paints such a clear picture in your mind while reading it. It leaves you wondering with the ended question which I find to be a lot better than over exaggerating. I like reading one-shots that are like this cause people of this modern day society can relate to it. Like you hear all the time of such tragedies but you made it from a different person point of view and I think that's what I enjoy the most about it. By the way you define the title perfectly. Sooo awesome job! Keep doing what you do and all that good stuff. : )
Thanks, friend.