@ alltimeh1gh Thank you lots aw! I'm always up for con-crit, thanks. I thought about the length too but I realised that I have a few other longer fics in the works and I felt like just writing something shorter every once in a while. But yeah, I know I should work on making some of my stories/chapters longer. Thank you!! :)
I really liked it! It was great! Idk if you want any constructive criticism, but maybe you could've made it a bit longer? Apart from that, awesome job!
Thank you lots aw! I'm always up for con-crit, thanks. I thought about the length too but I realised that I have a few other longer fics in the works and I felt like just writing something shorter every once in a while. But yeah, I know I should work on making some of my stories/chapters longer. Thank you!! :)