Devil's Night - Comments

I think this story has some real potential! I think the first chapter was perfect, I think you added the right amount of detail. I appreciate that you described the bus and what the other girls look like. I like that you both have a cheeky sense of humor. With that said I would like to see a bit more of Chris and Ricky's personalities, because I think it will help other readers get in to the story cause it will feel more real. Other than that I'm very pleased and very happy I found an MIW paranormal that I enjoy that isn't just smut. (Not that smut is a bad thing) but anyway I'm rambling. Good job guys!

@ RavenArtist93
You called yourself a ding dong. Thanks for the lovely comments dear!

@ RavenArtist93
It's okay c:

Thank you c:

@ RyderOMC

I didn't know there were other authors :C
_{still slightly tired from last night and not fully focused. I'm too much of a ding dong to realize who else is writing the story}
My friend, who is the other author on here, was all that I really knew that wrote the story.
First time reading it too.
I'm so sorry D:
It wasn't intentional.

Really good job on chapter 2 then!
I loved it :)

@ RavenArtist93
Um... I wrote chapter two, and I'm a guy...
But thank you c:

Okay I have to say,
By chapter 1, you really REALLY got me reeled into the story.
Chris sure is HOT. Damn right, he is hot haha.
You make him so dangerously sexy ;P
Way to bring the reader straight in the story for the first chapter :D

Now for Chapter 2,
LOL I laughed hard when Ricky asked Ryan if he was sexy and Ryan immediately said "I'm not gay" haha
I found that amusing.
The whole Ricky's moment in this chapter was awesome and insanely creepy...but damn, he sexy too!
Loved it!

And for Chapter 3,
I'm even hotter for Chris now.
You have me under his spell for damn sure!
Now I must get into this band xD
_{(not just for the looks but also lyrical meaning)}

So far I am really into this!
I must need more! D:

@ IRaceBarrels
I know right?

@ IRaceBarrels
I know right?

ALL MY YES!