February 24th, 2016 at 04:32am
Hello, here to deliver your contest prize!
Summary:
I would've liked to have seen more of a summary, but the one you gave does give at least a good look at what to expect which is great!
One/One:
I love how you opened everything up with that line of dialogue. You can already tell there's a lot of love in the dialogue. It's coming from someone that cares about Brian.
I love how real you made all of this. You showed that there are pros and cons to medication. Some make people stop living and simply become a zombie, while being off could cause problems to come back but at the same time, cause the person to start living again- as it goes with Brian.
Even I'm anxious to know what's going to happen onstage. I hope it's nothing too bad.
Ahhh, no, baby. I feel so much for Brian! The poor soul. Agh, I just want to hug him.
I love the relationship/friendship between Brian and Stefan. There is real love and concern there and you portrayed that beautifully.
I can't say anything negative about the story. I didn't see any mistakes and everything flowed perfectly. You did an absolutely amazing job. Well done!
Thanls a bunch! :)