This is just ... wow. I'm honestly speechless. I never knew that I could love and hate two characters so much so quickly. Your writing style is beautiful, and it definitely lends itself to this dark-set story type. It's eye-catching, suspenseful, and you leave 'us' readers hanging on your every word. I cannot wait for you to continue this; I will be suggesting it to friends, and I myself will definitely be following along. Best wishes!