Love From a Distance - Comments

@ ziramrivera18
right? I would love to get 5 in one night, but especially from Patrick Stump *swoon*

Oh my god so much just happened!!!! My heart was racing during his proposal, it was so perfect and beautiful and I wanted to cry along with Annie omg. I'm so excited for the next chapter!!!!

5. i would love to get 5 too. hahah :D

@ Ali Cat
I love to write the sex scenes, they're so much fun! And who doesn't fantasize about getting naked with Patrick Stump??
I love Annie and Patrick together and I so want them to work out. I have been there, too, I know how hard it can be to maintain a long-distance relationship. I got super sad when I wrote it just remembering things I have experienced. You have to try and stay strong to get through it, but sometimes you just can't.
I hope you like where the story is going! I really do appreciate all of your feedback. You're the best!

This was so heartbreaking and sad omg it made me want to cry :( I can relate to how this feels because sometimes I don't see my boyfriend for a week or two weeks, and I know it isn't THAT long but it just feels that way and you just want to spend time with them. I really felt for Annie in this chapter and it made me sad to read but I hope she moves to California soon and I hope their time in Chicago is a blast and hopefully nothing bad happens in between D:

Okay, that sexy chapter after all those first sexy chapters wax just, *fans self*. I needed a cold shower after that.
I felt so emotional and so connected to them during their conversation about their relationship because I've had that conversation before. And it sucks, and it hurts, and you don't want it to end and you love them so much you just want to figure something out. I really felt connected to that part and you did a really great job of translating that feeling through your words. I like how you brought comedy back into the ending to lighten things up, just like Patrick would.

"I'm not ready for this to be over. I don't know if I ever will be." Damn. I love this line so much. So so so so much. I can't wait for more!

lmao, he was thinking about Baseball to keep himself from coming. How can you not love that?

@ Ali Cat
Hot? Tell me about it! All those people that think Patrick is some innocent little virgin are so wrong. First of all, he's 30 years old, and second you know he's amazing. He's a hot little rock star ;) *sigh*

I try to make it seem as real as possible. Some people write sex scenes and it's so perfect and polished and nothing goes wrong and that's just not real life. No one is that confident, especially not their first time with someone. I really wanted to make Patrick be the one to wait until it really meant something because if he was coming off a divorce he would be worried about ruining things with someone he really cares about. I tried to make it seem as special as I pictured it in my head, so I'm so happy felt it was. Thanks so much for all your encouragement! Love to you, my dear!!

@ Ali Cat
drunk Patrick is super hot and I can totally see him being like that since he has said he is super cheerful and loves everyone when he is drunk. and you know he would be totally embarrassed the next day if he talked to her like that! adorable!!

This was so hot holy fucking shit I'm so turned on I need Patrick to be mine! I love how awkward they were it made me so happy because that's exactly how it's like in real life and you did a good job of capturing that, and capturing how special a "first time" is.

“Patrick, if you’re not careful, you’re going to make me fall in love with you.” God I loved this so fucking much, especially when his only response was "Good". Goddamn I'm so in love with them

I'm so excited for the next chapter. I'm in love with drunk Patrick though and I love how bad he felt the next day. Eek I just love this.

@ JustOneYoungVolcano
thanks so much! so glad you are enjoying it! I am having sooo much fun writing it and am also dying from the feels. *sigh* Patrick :D

@ Ali Cat
right? don't worry, my dear. naked time will happen soon, I promise!! <3

I love this story, so so cute. It's so cute that she's starting to listen to all of Fall Out Boy's albums and Soul Punk. Even more cute that she's buying the albums to support him and Fall Out Boy. Just leave me alone to die from all the cuteness.

ugh sTOP THEY NEED TO BANG I CAN'T TAKE IT. Patrick is so cute I just want to die

@ Ali Cat
you know I love me some sexy times, so just be patient, sweets! and thanks so much for your kind words and comments. love you!

Ugh stop I love this so much. I love their relationship and how she literally knows nothing about Patrick, it's so adorable. I really liked the line about her feeling like she was on drugs and on fire at the same time. This whole chapter was such a tease and so hot ugh I just want moreeeee

@ mswrite85
Muah!!!

Well, look at you!! Got your story up and running! Great start and hope to see more :)

@ Ali Cat
you know how much I love Patrick, too. I just liked the idea that she could get to know him - if only a little - before seeing his music. believe me when I tell you there is good stuff coming up ;)