Breathing - Comments

  • Goddess of Floyd

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    I read the prequel to this a while back, and when I saw that this story was related to it, I was really curious. This is so incredibly well written, and the whole thing holds an air of mystery about it. I really love that.

    Even though you don't use names, you've somehow managed to make this story seem so personal to the characters themselves. I know that doesn't make much sense, but I dunno how else to describe it!

    In short, I love it. Nice work!
    February 22nd, 2015 at 07:01pm
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    @ Limitless;;
    Thank you so much. Your comment made my morning.
    September 16th, 2014 at 06:07pm
  • Limitless;;

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    This was amazing. I love how well you described the girl who had died, and I also love how you tied the two stories together. It's brilliant.
    September 16th, 2014 at 02:20pm