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  • AutumnBlooms

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    Oh, I am so sorry to hear about your dad! I'll be keeping you in my thoughts. <3

    I liked the chapter a lot. Even though it was short, it was to the point and I know there's not really a whole lot to be said about what happened, so it fits well with the situation.

    Take as long as you need! We're still here, patiently waiting. You need your time, that's understood! :) Again, I'll be thinking of you.
    May 28th, 2015 at 07:18pm
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    May 28th, 2015 at 03:44am
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    May 28th, 2015 at 03:44am
  • ForeverRocking660

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    aggg my heart. it hurts. this is a fabulous story and i've binge read it all. I hope you update soon :)
    April 25th, 2015 at 06:49pm
  • Famous Friend.

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    @ AutumnBlooms

    @ bailey08

    I'm so sorry you guys. Work has taken up all my time but I swear I will make it my priority to write the next update tomorrow. Thank you so much for your patience.
    April 14th, 2015 at 02:23am
  • AutumnBlooms

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    I hope you update soon! I keep checking! :D I miss this story!
    April 14th, 2015 at 01:47am
  • bailey08

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    Please update soon!!!
    April 9th, 2015 at 11:16pm
  • AutumnBlooms

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    Read all of it today. CANNOT wait for the next chapter. I wonder how this will change Brendon and Amber's relationship?
    March 26th, 2015 at 06:08pm
  • DreamsInOblivion

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    Awesome story; was a delight to read through in one go. I am definitely looking forward to your update (especially after such a cliff hanger).
    March 16th, 2015 at 09:12am
  • theorychicken

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    Oh no oh no oh no :(
    March 13th, 2015 at 06:20pm
  • LiacideXIII

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    Fuck. Seriously?! Ugh, I can't believe that! I guess he really doesn't have a reason to stay now. No sex. No baby. All he is is just a useless person.
    March 13th, 2015 at 02:22am
  • poison and blood

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    Called this as soon as she got pregnant, but it's still too much for my heart
    March 12th, 2015 at 11:04pm
  • santi santi

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    Oh no Sad it's all Brendon's fault!
    March 12th, 2015 at 01:50pm
  • UnNamedStoryTeller

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    So glad I saw the update!
    I can't wait to see what happens next!
    March 12th, 2015 at 10:03am
  • HopetotheHopeless

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    I KNEW SOMETHING WAS WRONG SINCE THE LAST TIME SHE HAD PAIN! oh good golly I hope she didn't really lose the baby! I mean it's be interesting to see where you'll take it if she really did but oh no!!!!!
    March 12th, 2015 at 09:35am
  • bailey08

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    please update!!!!!
    March 9th, 2015 at 02:43am
  • DreamingCorpse

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    Oops, sorry. Pressed the submit button more than once!
    March 8th, 2015 at 09:41pm
  • DreamingCorpse

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    I'm pretty much enthralled with this story. I love how the plot is working itself out and the different drama and trials you put the characters through. I really hope you update soon because I'm addicted to this story! I just read through all of the chapters this morning and can't wait to read some more!
    March 8th, 2015 at 09:40pm
  • CountSynula

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    So glad that I clicked on this story! I don't normally read Urie fics because I always search for other things first but he's definitely attractive! He has a great voice too! Enough fan girling. I read up until the fourth chapter so far and I'm loving not only the sexual chemistry between them, but also how sweet and reassuring Brendon is. I nearly squealed when he showed back up at the bar wanting to see her again! The overall flow of the words in this story is enjoyable and I never got bored or felt like you just babbled on about one thing too much. The only criticism I'd give is there are a few words which are not spelled incorrectly but are used in the wrong sense. Like in the fourth chapter, it said "the same bartended from the night before." That's really the only errors. I plan to read more of this! Great job!
    March 7th, 2015 at 02:23am
  • LiacideXIII

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    First off, I’d like to say that there are very few spelling errors scattered and it’s so few that they aren’t enough to ruin reading the story. This is exactly why I hate that open relationships or marriages are a thing. It really hurts to see how much Amber is falling in love with Brendon and how much he cares about her, but if she means enough for him to stay with her for the baby, then he should have told his wife sooner. It pisses me off that he gets mad at her for getting upset, though I understand whenever she hadn’t told him about the baby though I get why. Something tells me that karma is coming in a bad way. I subscribed and recommended this because I’m really into it and want more. You know how to get the readers emotions acting up.
    March 2nd, 2015 at 09:40pm