Escaping Never Land - Comments

I think he will find her, I just don't know what it will take or what state she will be in when he arrives Some nice descriptions in this chapter. Keep writing!

I love this! The background to each character is unique and makes the story interesting. I LOVE that Hook the hero, is just suits him. I can't wait for you to update more :)

I liked this chapter and how you established the horrible things that Pan has done. I hope to see more of Perdita with Hook because they clearly have a nice relationship and it would be good to have some more happiness amongst the cruelness from Pan. But now I'm worried that Pan has set his eyes on Hook I hope you can update soon!

First off, I'm obsessed with your layout. So there is that. But honestly, I really love this already. I kind of get some sort of sinisterly-playful feel for Peter. Not that he's evil, but there is something definitely intimidating about the way you describe him. I love this already. Cannot wait to read the rest doll!

I like it so far! The descriptions at the start really set the scene well and I'm interested in seeing what happens next! Keep on writing!