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This was absolutely wonderful to read. I think the way that you described the relationships between each character was very real and none of their dialogue seemed forced or in any way fake. I was fascinated from the first line onwards! I loved Pete's character and the way you portrayed him, and the whole MeowMeow thing made me laugh. It was awesome

"I didn't give it to you. Later, Miss Meow."

ohhh that cheeky bastard. I sincerely laughed out loud at the whole "meowmeow" thing, that's such a Pete thing to bring it up and taunt her with, too.

I love this story because I went through a very similar experience where I dropped my phone (MY VERY FIRST IPHONE, TOO) in the pit at a Panic! concert a couple years ago. Someone (miraculously) did find it unscathed and gave it back to me, but it wasn't Brendon Urie :[ only in my dreams...

Ah! I'm so happy you updated!!
I love this story so much. And this chapter. I loved the conversation between Pete and Catelyn, it was great.
I can't wait til the next update.

Pete's tired disenchantment with the whole rock star deal definitely came across, don't worry. I've toyed with playing the same emotions in fics before, never as good as what you wrote in this chapter, though. I also like that you're including every aspect of Pete's life, even Meagan and Bronx. It makes it more interesting (and I'm so mad that he cheated on her omg wtf Pete???)

and I love that you're putting breaks in each chapter to offer different perspectives and memories and such. It really makes me wonder what went so wrong in Nat and Cat's relationship. (Also I can't wait until Pete realizes the phone isn't his, hahaha)

a bisexual main character, mention of the school I go to AND a shoutout to me in the author's note? damn, girl, you really know how to hook me in

no but really, I can tell that you're an extremely talented writer and I can't wait to see where this story goes. The characters are already so interesting and it's making me curious to see what the deal is with Catelyn and Nat and how exactly Pete will tie in with all of it.

P.S. HMMMMmmmm I WONDER who's gonna end up finding the phone

I am completely and utterly hooked on this story.
You're a great writer and this seems like it's going to be a great story.
Can't wait to read more!