5:26 - Comments

This is beautifully written :) It's full of emotion and pulls the reader in

I'm starting to see a pattern here. I am definitely starting to see a pattern here and now I'm convinced that all you contestants got together and planned to write all these heartbreaking pieces to absolutely ruin me. I'm onto you guys.

Now, onto a much more serious note.

This was so beautiful, oh my god. It's such a small detail, but I loved that all the texts were at 5:26. Moving onto the content of the story, I had the overwhelming urge to cry because this story was...sadly relatable for me. I've been there and it hurts so much, and the fact that you managed to capture that pain, that heartbreak, in texts of all things is absolutely amazing and a talent because you didn't provide internal monologue or detail yet you still managed to break my heart. I absolutely loved how this was written, too.

It was such a unique approach to common situation and I absolutely loved it. Because this was for the contest, I'll admit that I looked for something wrong with the story, but I honestly didn't find a single thing. It was raw, realistic, and relatable; bonus being that I didn't see any errors! So you did an absolutely fantastic job with this and it was undoubtedly amazing.

Ya know. Despite the heartbreak that I need to go cry out now. Bye.

Wow. I am speechless.

This is so beautifully written. And it holds so much meaning and emotion behind it. Even though it is written in a simple style. It really tugged at my heartstrings and I love that about this piece. This is so well done, good job.