Her - Comments

I’m here as the new judge for the ‘Drabble Contest’.

This is a really bittersweet drabble. Where it has the promise of love, it ends up being a dream. It’s actually heartbreaking in a way. You made it seem like it was actually happening for the reader so I imagine it felt so real for the narrator, too, and the shock of waking up was probably as shattering. It actually took me by surprise.

Your writing was very solid, as well. You had a very consistent and soft flow to the entire thing. You managed to capture a longing emotion and express it thoroughly to the readers. The prose contained a lot of passion, yearning, and love. To portray that, to write about it in such a way that the readers connect and feel it, is a great thing, so good job.

This is truly written with pure perfection. Oh how I've missed reading your work.

The summary was perfect in every way, so beautiful. The whole thing is beautifully written and hell girl, you should be proud of this.

Straight off the bat, I'd like to give you praise for the poem you wrote in your summary, just beautiful!

I started off smiling reading this, the way you've written it is truly beautiful. I was utterly heartbroken when you finished though, It was all a dream :(

Your an evil, evil person :P

I feel so mixed about this, it's beautiful, but it's tragic because it's all just an illusion in the end. For such a short piece, it's made me feel a lot of emotion, which I find rare in drabbles since I usually have trouble connecting to the characters. This is simply beautiful, no matter how sad you ended it. You should be proud :D

You know I love your stories and this isn't an exception. I love the summary. It really ties in with the story. Like I seriously love it. It's short and sweet. Plus the ending is great. And I can go on and on about great this story is. Well, I can do that with all of your stories. You never fail to impress me, my dear twin.

This was really amazing. I adore this!