Loves Me Not - Comments

Hey! I was just randomly looking at stories from people I don't know and stumbled across this one.
It is REALY good.
I love your characters and your plot line is kinda cool
Your an awesome writer I can't wait to read more of your stuff! :D

I really love this story :)

Hey I found your stories!!! This is just so heartbreaking to read! Please, continue it.

There's something about this story then just genuinely intrigues me. I'm not exactly sure why (cause ya'know, if you want to be technical about it all, everything you write is fucking amazing, durr) but I think it's just...how it's written. I don't know, it's just really amazing and keeps me wanting to read more.

Another thing that attracts me to this story is that you refer to Mikey as 'Micheal'. It really gives him this different persona than what he usually has. I can see him as this sturdy business man who no one would ever suspect as gay.

Frank's persona is really different that what he's normally captured as, as well. He's kinda rough, but not in a hurting kind of way. Like, when he yells and startles Mikey, and all his thoughts are really unique. It's different. I love it.

I'm sorry that it took forever for me to comment this. I mean, I read it a little while ago, I just didn't know how to structure a comment. So, yeah, here it is, and I hope it's alright, aha.

Keep writing this one, it's becoming one of my favorites.



But you know, everything you write is my favorite.

:arms:

ily.

i like it. it's so different to everything else.

awesome. cant wait for the next update!!!!

This is and interesting storyline. Keep writing, I like it. I subscribed too. ;)
:hug: xo.

This is breathtaking.
And sad.

Why can't Frank just be happy? I can't wait to dig deeper.

The way these two interact really caught me off guard.

So close, yet so far from each other. Frank's actions, or rather lack there of, convey so much in saying so little. It seems like either Micheal is oblivious, or is in a very serious state of denial.

And using Micheal, a very nice touch indeed.

That's it, *subscribes* another of yours that has completely sucked me in.

AWW!!

Frankie doesn't really love Mikey!!

Why not??

Update SPoon!

This is really really good,
And i'd love for you to continue.
More soon?
:)

oh i can't wait for more!
please another chapter soon?

are all of your stories are like brought to my computer from some higher power? they all blow me away! so far i am liking this i cannot wait for the rest!!

Aw, Frank seems so.. distant? Sad?
I could say lonely, but it's evident that he's getting laid. :file:

This is amazing, just how the other story would have been, but hey, you're writing it, so that's pretty fucking obvious.

I'm looking forward to more of this, and well, of everything else you've ever written and going to write. :tehe:

ily.
:arms:

So did you hear?
MINDFREAK. OWNS THIS THREAD.

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