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  • JustDuckie

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    How am I just now reading this!? I love it! Please update!
    September 12th, 2018 at 05:35am
  • simply amanda;

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    Loved the update ^^
    October 11th, 2015 at 04:46pm
  • heretic.

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    Finally found some time to catch up with the last two chapters.

    I'm so intrigued by Valentin! Why was he watching her, what does he want from her? There has to be something, he wouldn't just watch a young girl grow for the sake of it.

    I'm very excited to read the next chapter, to see what happened to Cristian to make it so dark.

    Eeeep! :D
    November 16th, 2014 at 05:34pm
  • simply amanda;

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    Amazing update honey! I love the new banner!
    September 29th, 2014 at 02:50pm
  • chasingdaisies;

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    So, this is intriguing. I can't wait to read more of this.
    September 29th, 2014 at 04:30am
  • heretic.

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    Okay, you got me hooked! Actually, I was hooked by the first paragraph.

    The banner is awesome, I can't wait to meet all of those characters.

    I love the references to Twilight (I hated that franchise, too) and to Elisabeth Bathory, she intrigues me. I like that Wyatt is British and Crina is Romanian, all I see in stories are Americans. The description of the room, Crina telling him his thoughts, so good!

    I very much like your style of writing and this story, subscribed!
    September 27th, 2014 at 08:23pm
  • simply amanda;

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    I am already hooked to this! I adore it! And can't wait for more!
    September 20th, 2014 at 11:07pm