Content Such a beautiful piece. This is one of the most unique one shots I've read on here. I'm glad you touched such a sensitive subject, that was a problem in the past, and still is in some nations. Amazing writing and portrayal. The imagery was perfect too. Brilliant work.
Errors None. I'm surprised, because I seem to find errors somehow. This was simply perfect.
Overall I really loved the blunt narration and the perfection of it. Your writing is wonderful and I really enjoyed reading this short, simple, yet powerful piece. Keep up the excellent work!
Content
Such a beautiful piece. This is one of the most unique one shots I've read on here. I'm glad you touched such a sensitive subject, that was a problem in the past, and still is in some nations. Amazing writing and portrayal. The imagery was perfect too. Brilliant work.
Errors
None. I'm surprised, because I seem to find errors somehow. This was simply perfect.
Overall
I really loved the blunt narration and the perfection of it. Your writing is wonderful and I really enjoyed reading this short, simple, yet powerful piece. Keep up the excellent work!