Shining Light - Comments

This story was heartbreaking. Poor Rosa, and most of all poor Brian. I agree, she should have told him sooner. But, still. I have tears in my eyes...

Just a little thing, some of your sentences and paragraphs didn't make sense, so that made the story a little hard to read. It was only minor, though.

Since I am one of your best friends I reserve the right to call you a bitch for making me cry. I loved this it was so sad I loved how in love they were on the beach and how everything played out, you did a wonderful job. -claps- Bravo! I love it. xx

That was awesome but so tragic . I loved the emotion you poured into it. When she finally died, it was so real. I really did have tears in my eyes reading this. Well done xxx