If I Needed You There - Comments

it just hit me that i never properly commented on the most recent chapter but i need to say that this is truly one of the most amazing things i have ever read and i reread the five chapters you've blessed us with over and over and over and it's just so. i love this to pieces.

"Louis honestly hates everything.

It isn’t even a fucking exaggeration." oh shoot man i dunno if i'm ready for this it's 9:38 in the morning and i'm about to sob loUIS BABY

The whole piece about how he once lived for the half-hearted "good job, son" moments is killing me. He's moved on from it because he knows it's not the proper praise, it's fake and he can still see that he's not good enough and he doesn't even give a damn about the sport, Jesus, and he still manages to kick ass, so chill on him, Papa Tommo.

I REMEMBER IN THE PROLOGUE WHEN IT WAS MENTIONED HE REALLY LOVED GRAVEYARDS AAH I'M CONNECTING

That description, though. I'm absolutely in love with it, okay, like deep, deep in love.

HE APOLOGIZES TO THE SPIRIT HE JUST STOOD ON BLESS LOUIS' SOUL MAN. This is so asdfgjkl; like you don't know how happy I am that this story is back in my freaking life I adore it so much.

Ahh, lifecoach!Niall out here making things better. And Harry. Of course Harry making things better. But how wonderful is this line, though: “it” being finally talking to Harry, and hopefully wooing him and subsequently galloping off into the sunset together, happy at last." I just. I can't with this, I love it. Help. hELp.

NO WAIT AND THERE GOES MY FEELS BECAUSE LOUIS F O R G O T WHAT A NORMAL SMILE FEELS LIKE MOTHER OF JESUS I'M DEAD I WAS JUST SMILING AND NOW I'M DEAD.

That's so sad that I'm just a pile of sobbing nothing.

mm zayn hello.

Niall's so great and wonderful and just bringing things to liFE FUCK NO DID I JUST SEE CAROLINE AS IN GIRLFRIEND AS IN HARRY'S AS IN HARRY'S NOT AVAILABLE FOR LOUIS AS IN SOBBING AGAIN. GODDAMMIT LOUIS NEEDS A BIG HUG AND A BREATH OF FRESH AIR.

“Before you go, give me your phone. I want to give you my number.”

"Louis nods his head, eager like a puppy. “Yeah, I love music.” AWAWAW SO ADORABLE I CAN JUST SEE IT LITTLE EAGER PUPPY LOU D'AWWW.

wait his parents yelled at him and sent him to bed without dinner bruh um no. no. no. that's not-that's not good. aND IT DOESN'T HURT AS BAD BECAUSE NUMBER BUT STILL THAT'S AWFUL BUT NUMBER. I'm conflicted and hurt and wanting to hug and pinch some cheeks because so cute and so painful. This is fantastical and I'm in love and so happy this is back just asghl; yay.

OMG I just found this and I love love love it. There needs to be more H/L on here, and you are contributing with a great writing style and a lovely plot line!!

OMFG HOW IS THERE NOT MORE!
This breaks my heart, but it's so great. I want to see Lou happy with Harry omfg.

"...hellfire is about to rain down on him, and well, it’s not like it hasn’t happened before. It isn’t as if it’s going to change anything."

LOUIS NO YOU SHOULD NOT BE USED TO HELLFIRE.

Okay, Louis' mom is not pleasant and scary and no, please, she needs to go to some sort of parenting class because that is unacceptable. So because you've bought things for him and go to the games that he may or may not even want to play like gtfo then he should never feel bad ever in his life, okay. And, oh, because he's popular and getting good grades (lemme tell you from personal experience, lady, the kids with the good grades can very well be some of the most miserable so) then there-this-i-this just killed me: "There isn't a reason for you to not feel well."



CHECK YOURSELF BEFORE YOU WRECK YOURSELF, MOMMA TOMLINSON.

It's just awful and the way she's reacting and the things she's saying are so uncalled for and just. Poor Louis, I'll say it again. She just dismisses him. DISMISSES HIM. Like she's done with the problem at hand, doesn't want to deal with it so she's pushing it off, brushing it away, and that's so awful.

"And briefly he ponders the idea of maybe one day not running away from all his problems, but then that thought is filed away, too, just like all the others."

It's okay, I didn't need my heart.

LOUIS IT'S OKAY I LOVE YOU SHH SHH.

this just hurt all my feels in one big attack. i love it.

Pshh, of course it isn't disappointing! Your writing never has been and never will be disappointing, I will be sitting in wonder every time this is updated.

I hope you're having a bomb ass day.

WHAT DID I SAY DIDN'T I KNOW THIS WAS DESTINED FOR GREATNESS OH MY GOSHES.

This is making me feel some kind of way, I love it to pieces and we're only on the first official chapter. Louis, just. . .poor baby. The very first section of the chapter and my heart is breaking, oh my goodness.

"And despite how loving and normal his mum tries to make their family seem, the only real contact they have with each other was when someone is leaving." YOU CANNOT HURT ME LIKE THIS MAN (but no you're doing great).

Louis has some unpleasant friends. Guys, no one wants to be crude all the time except some of the boys in my school like lolno run away and I don't doubt that Harry's buddies have better conversations and are just plain cooler because hello. Poor Louis, that's what he's stuck with and sure, there's Stan but he changes when he's around the dic--boys on the team and that's not cool. He seems pretty great on his own, though, and that's lovely.

I just wanna hug Louis, okay, I wanna hold him forever because Louis.

"Louis hates feelings; he’s been cursed with so many of them – so many, in fact, that he is overwhelmed with what they mean and thus comes across to outsiders as brass and cold."

HELLO NIALL BLESS YOU AND YOUR IRISHNESS AND SO KIND AND ACTUALLY TRYING TO GET TO KNOW HIM A LITTLE BIT WOW YOU ARE A SAINT I LOVE YOU WAIT NO DON'T RUN AWAY SCREW CLASS WAIT NIALL

This was amazing, just as I suspected it would be, and I'm just so glad this is being written because it's flawless. I'm in love. Keep up the fabulous work!!

@ heroes.
omg thank you so much!!!!!!!!!

I don't think you know how excited I am for this because I am excited and this is going to be amazing because just the prologue has me twisting in my seat in pure happiness and excitement WOW.

bless this