"...past the boot and up to her…dagger." - classic you, right there The Midnight Maiden has such a nice ring to it, you'll have to write about her again some time Sorry for the lack of commentary that I would usually do as I read your work, but y'know, I have my reasons for this piece You did so well for a first at writing het sex - instead of giggling like you did (seriously?! ) I was more like And of course I really like that it wasn't just PWOP, and that the dancing girl wasn't just a reference to a whore-like situation that I initially thought. She is a strong character and had the right kind of chemistry with him. Absolutely fantastic and worth the wait
The Midnight Maiden has such a nice ring to it, you'll have to write about her again some time
Sorry for the lack of commentary that I would usually do as I read your work, but y'know, I have my reasons for this piece