Oooh! I love apocalyptic stories with zombies and stuff.
I can tell that this story is going to be epic once things really start to get going. The first two introductory chapters were great, though! You've clearly put so much details and effort into them!
The only point of constructive criticism I have is more down to my own preference than anything else, so you don't have to take it too seriously! You start the first chapter with lots of paragraphs of solid information about the character's backstory. There's nothing wrong with that at all, but personally, I would have withheld some of that information and revealed it more slowly as the story went on. That way, the reader would be in more suspense over what happens next.
But of course, that's just my own opinion! I know that tons of readers that prefer reading solid parts of a character's backstory, so don't feel like you need to take this to heart! This is a great story you have here, and I'm sure it's gonna be awesome as you keep writing it!
This is really well written, and I love the fact that you've chosen detail over dialogue in these chapters, everything I read formed a scene in my head, and it could have easily been a movie I was watching (I dunno if that makes sense)
I can tell that this story is going to be epic once things really start to get going. The first two introductory chapters were great, though! You've clearly put so much details and effort into them!
The only point of constructive criticism I have is more down to my own preference than anything else, so you don't have to take it too seriously! You start the first chapter with lots of paragraphs of solid information about the character's backstory. There's nothing wrong with that at all, but personally, I would have withheld some of that information and revealed it more slowly as the story went on. That way, the reader would be in more suspense over what happens next.
But of course, that's just my own opinion! I know that tons of readers that prefer reading solid parts of a character's backstory, so don't feel like you need to take this to heart! This is a great story you have here, and I'm sure it's gonna be awesome as you keep writing it!