June 6th, 2009 at 01:24pm
:D
i am so confused!
but thats ok, i can't wait to figure it out.
Pretty as a Car Crash - Comments
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March 3rd, 2009 at 05:09am
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Yay! Finally!
It's soooo good! more soon!January 1st, 2009 at 04:44am -
=] Thank youOctober 26th, 2008 at 09:46pm
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Love it to death Mejen!
More soon!October 26th, 2008 at 04:33am -
Oh my God, I love it. It's really good. *subscribes*October 25th, 2008 at 09:08pm
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I really like this, honest. I like the banners of the official first chapter, the fourth chapter and the Gasper one.
Chapter 7: "I sense a pair of eyes on me", I really like that :weird
Good to know I'm not the only one who talks to clouds. :tehe:
when he gets hit in the face and tells the woman he can handle it from there, I was going major-lmfao.
I think he's socially inept. :con:
Also your authors notes mention how you want us to rate your story. The rating happens from the amount of readers you get. So technically, you want more people to read your story. :con:
An update would be amazing.October 25th, 2008 at 02:12am -
FINALLY MEJEN!!! JEEBUS!!!
really good. Write more soon!October 16th, 2008 at 12:41am -
YAY!! AN UPDATE!! Really awesome Mejen!
Update soon?September 13th, 2008 at 05:03am -
Thank you. =]
Hopefully. lolAugust 22nd, 2008 at 05:56am -
This is really good. It's sad but it's really good. You're an awesome writer =]
Update soon yeah?August 22nd, 2008 at 05:50am -
=] Thanx Rachel-Hannah.
And thank you to everyone that's commented thus far. =DJune 7th, 2008 at 01:33am -
Wow. I didn't just expect her best friend to die. I'm liking where this is going, Mejen.June 6th, 2008 at 07:47pm
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mejenn!!
mercedes [guiltyxoxolove] from quizilla.
lovvvvvvvvve this story.
<33333June 5th, 2008 at 02:10am -
omg! this is one of the best stories ever..
it kinda made me cry.
:*(
but good job!June 5th, 2008 at 02:00am -
Thanx Rachel-Hannah.- doodlebug752:
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I really like the prolouge to this, Mejen. It was one of those more refreshing reads...which sound rather novel worthy to me. That's probably because you didn't try and shove the paragraphs of characterisation work into the first few paragraphs. The introduction sounds much more like one that a person who was telling their story would.
Plus, the extract summary's got me glued.
Oh, and by the way, in the second part of the prolouge, I think a paragraph has been copied twice, and been in jammed in awkwardly.
I'll check that out.
-MejenJune 1st, 2008 at 06:27pm -
Wow!
I really like the prolouge to this, Mejen. It was one of those more refreshing reads...which sound rather novel worthy to me. That's probably because you didn't try and shove the paragraphs of characterisation work into the first few paragraphs. The introduction sounds much more like one that a person who was telling their story would.
Plus, the extract summary's got me glued.
Oh, and by the way, in the second part of the prolouge, I think a paragraph has been copied twice, and been in jammed in awkwardly.June 1st, 2008 at 04:28pm
AHH!! And, and poor Ashton... I think he's kinda heart broken :P:P
OH NO!! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!?? AHHH!!