Hold Your Breath - Comments

  • minimidget15

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    This story was good... I can't wait for the sequal!
    December 27th, 2008 at 03:34am
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    can't wait for the sequel :)

    xx
    December 23rd, 2008 at 04:24am
  • heytheremay

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    cheap.champagne:
    woah.
    mass updates.
    i can't believe it's almost over :(

    xx
    Don't fear! There shall be a sequel of that I'm sure!
    December 17th, 2008 at 02:29am
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    woah.
    mass updates.
    i can't believe it's almost over :(

    xx
    December 17th, 2008 at 02:08am
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    oh i've missed this story!
    it's one of my favourites.
    hope you get the hance to update again soon :)

    xx
    December 16th, 2008 at 09:12am
  • MassacreChan

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    Hmm.
    I can pretty much taste the drama stirring up.
    Lovely update.
    Another one soon would be heaven on earth.
    August 3rd, 2008 at 01:06am
  • lennonzest-

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    i'm subscribing! its really amazing! update, pleasee
    August 2nd, 2008 at 02:47pm
  • queenofapology

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    your story is...pretty much rad.

    i absolutely love it. it's currently...5 AM...yep. that pretty much explains how awesome it is. can't wait for the next update!
    xoxo
    August 2nd, 2008 at 01:47pm
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    ooh!
    okay, um, i actually dont think you understand how much i need an update.
    it's a very serious condition.
    obsession.
    so yeah, there's only one cure.
    update?
    xx
    August 2nd, 2008 at 03:13am
  • MassacreChan

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    She's Pregnannnnnt.
    Things are definetly going to get difficult.
    XP
    August 1st, 2008 at 07:05pm
  • Elegant Crime

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    Loved the update!!
    very interested to see where you got this going!!
    And YAY! for a sequel!!
    post more soon!! :P
    July 25th, 2008 at 08:59pm
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    loved it!
    this is one of my favourite stories ever.
    xx
    July 18th, 2008 at 02:32pm
  • Elegant Crime

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    Ah-Mazing!!!!
    I feel so sorry for Ryan!!
    post more soon!!!!
    July 5th, 2008 at 01:52am
  • electricgirls.

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    Absolutely freakin' amazing.
    Poor Ryan :/.
    July 3rd, 2008 at 03:29pm
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    LOVE.

    need i say more?

    xx
    July 3rd, 2008 at 12:05pm
  • Elegant Crime

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    *New Reader*
    I just started to read this and it's amazing!
    I absolutely love it. Vic, needs to realize her and Mike are better off just as friends and get with Ryan. And then they need to leave Sandy at a truck stop or something!!
    Post more soon. :P
    June 18th, 2008 at 02:25am
  • Phenakistoscope.

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    awwww!!!
    mike's great and everything... but it's ryro!
    ick. i dont like sandy. but i think that's the point, right?
    :)
    love it and can't wait for an update.
    xx
    June 16th, 2008 at 09:55am
  • DanceEmilyDance

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    I can't wait for the next chapterrrrr.

    It's gonna be awful when he finds
    out about the engagement, well I'm
    assuming it will be anyways.
    x_x
    June 15th, 2008 at 05:40pm
  • im a blur

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    Quite honestly, I don't know what was stopping her
    from pouncing on Ryan while he was singing her
    that song...I know I would have, regardless of
    whether or not my boyfriend was standing there. o.O

    That update was adorable :D
    June 15th, 2008 at 06:02am
  • DanceEmilyDance

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    Hmmmm, I'm already on
    chapter 17 and I started it
    an hour ago. . . lol, this is a
    great story.
    :]]
    June 14th, 2008 at 07:43pm