Other Voices, Other Rooms - Comments

Oh my God.
Thankyou!

I had to read this after seeing the name. :)

And I was blown away. Literally.

This is just... wow.

William is such a beautiful character in this. The opening in the church is just so poetic.

This first two paragraphs really held my attention and were so descriptive of him, I found myself desperate to find out why he was there in the first place. What it was he was doing that had led him there.

And finding out he was a murderer.... Well done. Did not see that shit coming.

But the closing line, that he was too young, tied this up beautifully.

I wanted to hate Ryan for making him do this, but in the end you realise that William will and most probably has done anything for him.

'But he was still much too young for this.'

Beautiful.

I like it.... kinda weird.... but still really good

Princess Chester.:

Bram Stoker develpoed part of his character Dracula from a queen (or something like that) who used to get young girls and kill them, bathing in their blood AND DRINKING IT bto gain their beauty and prevent ageing.
She killed something like 650 women. :cheese:

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Ohhh.... that -snorts-
That's where my partial inspiration came from :file:

...

And thanks, Ash :cute:

Princess Chester.:

Bram Stoker develpoed part of his character Dracula from a queen (or something like that) who used to get young girls and kill them, bathing in their blood AND DRINKING IT bto gain their beauty and prevent ageing.
She killed something like 650 women. :cheese:

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Die Blutgrafin? The Bloody Countess? :mrgreen:

The story's initial impact was omgno:
It was only the third reading, as the nausea subsided, that I was able to appreciate more the literary merit of it :tehe:

Bram Stoker develpoed part of his character Dracula from a queen (or something like that) who used to get young girls and kill them, bathing in their blood AND DRINKING IT bto gain their beauty and prevent ageing.
She killed something like 650 women. :cheese:

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Why the hell are you mentioning Bram Stoker, idiot :p
That crazy chick?
That crazy chick is you, dear.

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*is sick of stories in which you kill me*

Bram Stoker right?
That crazy chick?

Brilliant.
:cute:

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Deathficccccccccc.