It's been do so many times, but I actually really love the first chapter to this story. It's what we would all dream about; MCR all to ourselves. Yup, it's a little cliched, but hey, who gives a flying fuck! I've read it to the end, so it must be pretty damn good.
Two chapters is enough for me to fall in love with this story!! ;]
These just about made my day: "I'm pretty sure I heard a marriage proposal in there too." XD And this, "She looked like a small kid, allowed to eat cookies for dinner."