Sweat, Blood, and Music. - Comments

Whoa. That was absolutely amazing.

The words you used to describe everything flowed together perfectly and made everything so vivid. Even if you hadn't of said in the summary that it was meant to be about Gerard and Bert, I probably would have applied it to them anyways. Just the way it was wrote instinctively made me think of how either one of them would feel, but particularly how Bert would have felt.

You're a phenomenal author, that's really what it boils down to.

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That was really good : D

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That was so amazing....

The first paragraph was the best in my opinion but they were all phenominal.
I loved how the title kept creeping up and how you're not sure who the narrator is or who 'you' are.

The feeling, physical and emotional, all the way through it is so amazing and descriptive, i'd never be able to phrase this how you have.

It reminded me a lot of a very violent gig or a club and how things can go wrong there, but you still go, because it's what you love and it makes you feel alive.

Brilliant, hon. What an amazing start to my day as it is...12:14 am.

Your a tremendous writer and i know how hard you worked on this.

xx