Dark and Rainy Nights - Comments

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So, first off, I really enjoyed this story. I like that you had short, sweet chapters. It really captured the embodiment of it all, the fact that they meet during storms. Sometimes, storms are long-lasting, and sometimes they're quick and drenching. I really enjoyed all of the comparisons to him and storms.

I really enjoyed the story as a whole, as well, it was gripping and calm and flowing. Though, just a couple helpful suggestions, would be to, maybe, use a thesaurus because there were a couple instances that slightly broke the flow of the sentence by using the same word too close together. For example, "Goosebumps spread across my body like an infectious disease as my eyes laid upon another set of eyes." But, other than that, this was flawless in delivery. Also, I really liked the layout, I liked the color scheme, I liked this whole story. You did wonderfully. Keep up the good work, keep on writing~

Shayney, I'll hate you forever if the two guys don't end up together in the sequel. This guy is so not dying! I'll throw ya off the highest cliff in London!
Man, I had no idea you were such an amazing amazing writer (no offense, really) You describe emotions so well! I'm envious now!
Really what you'd expect. Look Mibba, that's my bro! You can chop my head off for that bear haha

@ lol101
It'll be worth the wait promise ;) hahaha.

damn bullies won't leave me alone :( lol hahahahahahaha!!! SEQUEL SOON PLEASE

@ lol101
Because I am a bully! haha. No, I felt as though this needed to happen. Really going for a punch in the chest here.

Thanks for following along and liking the story :D

@ akira_green
AWW! stop it you! haha. Thank you so much for your comment. :D ahhh smiling way to much. haha

All I can tell you is check the top right corner ;)

noooo why doth thou end this so rapidly :(

Hi!

Omg... Nope!!! I can't handle this Jesus Christ Q-Q Please tell that it isn't the end. Please!
Anyway I loved so freaking much. <3 Your writestyle is awsome. It's filled with emotions and it makes the whole thing just a little piece of perfectness. I hope you won't stop here ;)

Love, Akira ^^

@ So_What_16
hey! thanks! haha! Believe me I'm actually finding it hard. I just to babble on forever.

Thank you so much! I'm not sure if I have 5 in me but I'll see what I can do. :D haha!

yaaay fans!!

Hey this story is awesome. I'm never really good at keeping it as short and sweet as this. Good job. Please update like five so I can benge read some more (not like an actual command so much as a plea from a humble fan).

With all Due respect,
Constance Taylor

@ lol101
yaaay I has a fan! :D

keep at it!! I'm excited for more!!!v :)

@ lol101
Yeah it is! Scary writing this, struggle so much with romance! Thank you for your comment. :D Don't worry i will. It has to be done before the 11th so much rush haha!

wow this sounds excellent :) is this a gay story? Never read one of these before and it's definitely enticing :) Update soon please