Oh. My. Fucking. God. Jesus. Christ. Mother. Mary. Spongebob. SquarePants. James. Bond. Clifford. TheDog. Patrick. Star. Bat. Man. Super. Man Last but not least....
!SPATMAN na na na na SPATMAN! The superhero that TAKES NO SHIT, SPITS ON EMIMIES and...is a man? ...could be bisexual ;)
WHHHHAAATTTT?!?!??! I DON'T WANT SAZZY TO LEAAAVVVEE FRANKIE!!! And.....2 MORE CHAPTERS!?!??! Oh well....at least we know there's an imminent sequel. ^O^ Update please!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh, and 255 comments?? psh.
Why must you make me so sad with nearly every fucking update now? It's just so heartbreaking, seeing them like this. This chapter was written really strongly, Frank's lines especially.
Cannot wait for more...so update soon, yeah? haha..xox
awwwwwwwwwwwww.......U_U I want Sazzy to STAAAYYY .*whines* OH...yeah, *sings Ocean Avenue* Now I'm gonna have that song stuck in my head. UPDATE SOON!!!
I don't comment nearly as much as I should so I'll start now and make it my resolution to do so every chapter. I should start by saying - I love this story, I honestly do. You capture the feelings about everything perfectly and give enough detail about things without boring people to death with pages and pages of useless crap. It also despite that doesn't feel rushed like some tend to be. I guess my pointless ramble comes down to you pacing it well...
I also love how there is enough drama within the story to withold suspense without it being overly dramatic like some stories can become. I also find the events in your stories to be fresh and new, which despite my mass reading of fan fiction I have only come across some ideas maybe twice, if that.
That's what I love about this story - in brief. I'll end it here before I ramble all night about it like I have been known to do.
There's a place on the corner of Cherry Street We would walk on the beach in our bare feet We were both 18 and it felt so right Sleeping all day, staying up all night Staying up all night
Ah! Such a sad update! :( I need more soon, Sazz, and now you got your laptop, I do expect those few more updates!
For xmas I got a new CD player/docking station for my iPod; A Chiodos Album; Shit loads of Hello Kitty stuff; A Bowler Hat; A new phone; HMV Vouchers; Blue Banana Vouchers; The new MCR Calender; Clothes; Make Up; Madina Lake Album; Hair Dye; TWILIGHT ON FREAKIN DVD!!!; The Dark Night on DVD; How To Deal on DVD; More DVD's haha; Art Stuff; Posters....blah blah blah. I'm too lazy and too full of christmas dinner to write the rest...plus, I may have sorta forgotten what some people got me...OOH! A pokemon book as well!
Dawww, bubba's all hyped about her new laptop! xD Its so cute seeing you glued to that thing...and its pretty funny talking to you on MSN eventhough we're like....in the same house lamo! :D